Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 07:29PM
Title: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Wow that was intense. Go Lynn. I'm glad she threw that skank Ashley out, I probably would have dropped kicked her out with her damn giggling. Poor Mckenzie I hope she gets better, and I hope she ends back at Lynn's I think that is just what she needs. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle. I hope I didn't add too much drama....but can you really have too much drama in a story? LOL! I haven't decided what I'm going to do about Mackenzie returning or not returning to Lynn's yet but you should find out in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 05:56PM
Title: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Awesome update! i love that justin is admitting he has feelings for her!! cant wait till the next chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliment Kelly! I'll try to update asap. :)
Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 04:56PM
Title: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Why does it alwasy seem like the skank's name is Ashley? haha jk. Really cute about the feelings they have for eachother. Can't wait to see it really develop! :)
Author's Response: Awe, sorry about using the name Ashley, lol, it just popped into my head. Glad you like and thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 01:44PM
Title: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Aww, they have feelings for one another. Well okay, relationships are kinda the crux of most stories lol but it's still cute how they kinda confessed it. And BOO! to the Ashley girl, she needs to get her skank ass away from Justin. I hate girls who giggle to feverantly lol. Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks Helena! I know what you mean about annoying girls like Ashely. Can't stand them! LOL! Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 01:21PM
Title: None
Wow haven't read in awhile. Dang girl you have alot going on. Dang Justin was a little harsh. I would probably cry too. Poor girl. That would be really tough to have someone bathe you. I also liked Lynn's point of view adds something extra to the story, a good something extra. And girl you have some dirty thoughts flowing I like the little bit with the Cosmo. Fun story. I cannot wait to read more!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 12:32PM
Title: None
I liked Lynn's point of view and how it gave a different perspective to their relationship. So yeah, post the update now pretty please lol.
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/05 - 12:32PM
Title: None
yes i liked it. update soon
Reviewer: monkeymonkey85
Signed
Date: 03/14/05 - 01:29AM
Title: Saying Goodbye
man... man... man update sooon yeah?
Author's Response: I'm workin' on it..... :)
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/05 - 10:43AM
Title: Saying Goodbye
love this story, update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Lola. Working on an update right now.
Reviewer: smrkks
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/05 - 07:35AM
Title: Saying Goodbye
hey... i just wanted to say that i like this story a lot. hopefully we'll get a quick next chapter since you left us hanging with Kenzie and Justin's fight? ;) have a good weekend.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like my story so much. I'll try my best to update asap since I did leave ya'll hangin' but no promises. ;) You have a great weekend too!
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