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Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/05 - 01:03PM
Title: The Rising Action
i'm so glad you chose to continue the story :D
All I can say is that Justin blew it LOL
Cant wait for the next chap.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. Everyone loves Enrique!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 04/19/05 - 01:19PM
Title: The Rising Action
All I can say is you're continuing the story....YAY!!
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you're excited!
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 07:59PM
Title: The Rising Action
EVEN IF JUSTIN WAS TELLING THE TRUTH, WHICH I THINK HE WAS, HE SHOULDN'T HAVE SAID IT LIKE THAT. HE JUST HAD TO REMIND HER OF THE THINGS SHE KNOWS AND WHEN SHE'S FINALLY HAPPY, HE MAKES HER FEEL REAL SHITTY ABOUT EVERYTHING.
SHE'S GOT A RIGHT TO BE MAD AT HIM FOR AS LONG AS SHE WANTS TO BE SO HE SHOULD LEAVE HER ALONE.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review and I'm glad you liked the chapter. Justin was a major butthole in this chapter and definatly stuck his foot in his mouth with the terrible things he said to her. And Mackenzie sure will be agry at him because, like you said, she has every right to be.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 06:22PM
Title: The Rising Action
Good I'm glad you came to your senses, and decided to continue with the story. Dang Justin and the stuff he said what a jerk! Seriously. Who would say some of the stuff he does. haha Great chapter I enjoy the drama with them.
Author's Response: Lover of drama huh? I am too but I have to keep myself in check so this doesn't end up to much like a soap opera. Some drama is good and keeps the reader intersted but too much just makes the story seem unrealistic. You'll have to make sure I don't get out of control. ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: smrkks
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 06:13PM
Title: The Rising Action
wow! thank God you didn't finish the story like that. i was so shocked. i really, really liked this chapter A LOT. i thrive for drama.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 06:07PM
Title: The Rising Action
I'm so glad you decided to continue the story too. But was being a jerk about it. Ugh he has learn to see things from her point of view if that's possible.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewng and you are exactly right about Justin. He'll come to his senses though....just like I did when I decided to continue the story ;)
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 02:05PM
Title: The Rising Action
Yay! I'm so glad you decided to continue this. This is such a cute story and I love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I don't think I've ever read a review from you before. It's always great to "see new faces" around here. LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/05 - 12:59PM
Title: The Rising Action
YOU CONTINUED! YAY! I love this story, and I'm glad theres still a chance for Enrique and Justin to get it on. But ugh, Justin that was SO insensitive, really. I can't believe he said that. Dumbass.
Author's Response: I'm glad I continued too. I'm not quite sure what I was thinking when I ended it there. Anywho, thanks so much for reviewing and yes I must agree that Justin is a major dumbass and very insensitve...at least at that moment he was. You have to put yourself in his shoes though and realize how upset he was (not that that is any excuse). I'll stop blabbing on now. Thanks for reviewing!
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