Reviewer: Laurencoz Signed Date: 02/01/06 - 12:00PM Title: Chapter 18

This is getting so good - I wonder what he has to talk to her about - update soon!


Reviewer: Mattison30 Signed Date: 02/01/06 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 18

Yay! You finally updated again! :) Great chapter. I really like Justin and Becca together...they're so cute! Becca just needs to come clean with Brit and tell her what's going on with her and Justin. The longer she waits, the worst it will be. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. Update again soon.

P.S. Hope my reviewed helped to cure that writer's block of yours. ;) Reviews normally help me.


Reviewer: lroberts Anonymous Date: 10/23/05 - 11:12PM Title: chapter 17

I'm so tempted to jump around in joy. Finally!! And yet, what is Britney gonna say? I like Britner despite her anger manegement problems. Ooh, girl, update soon!


Reviewer: lroberts Anonymous Date: 09/17/05 - 11:03PM Title: chapter 16

I just hope she doesn't get to into Justin; Britney won't like that they're dating. MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!! lol, I'm dieing here!

Author's Response: thank you so much for reading. I will definitely try to work on making the chapters longer, especially since i have sch a captive audience. I hope you continue readig it and Ihipe that it gets twice as good.


Reviewer: Mattison30 Signed Date: 09/06/05 - 08:51PM Title: chapter 14

I'm going to review for both this and the last chapter here, okay? Okay. I can't tell you how excited I am that Becca and Justin are finally going to go on a date which means that they're finally admitting more than friendly feelings for each other. Awesome! I don't really know what to think of the whole Brittany situation. I'm sure she'll be pissed once she finds out about all the sneaking around especially the soon to be date. I just hope she doesn't go a ruin everything--I'm sure she will because you have to have drama to keep the story interesting but I would love it if she didn't. :) Anywho, great updates and I can't wait to read about what happens on this date. Update soon please!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you love the story. Thanks for reviewing, b/c it means a ton to me. There's another chapter up, so I hope you like that as well. I can't wait to see what happens next with Justin and Elli.


Reviewer: Mattison30 Anonymous Date: 08/08/05 - 09:26AM Title: chapter 12

Great update as usual! Bad Justin for not better conseeling himself. :) I hope everything works out for them eventually so they don't have to keep hiding thier relationship. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, that really means alot coming from the suthor of one of my all time favorites (HOLES). Anyone reading this should check it out.


Reviewer: cara Anonymous Date: 07/24/05 - 07:32PM Title: concern

In the 1st chapter she says I'm Becca, Britneys Best friend and In the summary it says cousin. .Maybe you mean Bestfriends that are also cousins. Can't wait till you update

Author's Response: Thanks for responding. I didn't realize that I'd said that but now, thanks to you, I can make the necessary changes. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.


Reviewer: cara Anonymous Date: 07/18/05 - 04:37PM Title: chapter 1

i thought britney was her cousin. anyway its good. Update soon


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 06:10PM Title: chapter 10

Ooo she is lucky to get out of that little pickle. That would be horrible if Brit knew that Becca was talking to Justin. What a cat fight that would probably be. Can't wait to read what happens next.


Reviewer: Mattison30 Signed Date: 07/14/05 - 12:43PM Title: chapter 10

Love it! You need to get to updating again. I must know what happens next and I could just a bit more Justin in the next chapter, lol! Great update!





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