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Reviewer: isela
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/05 - 03:43PM
Title: Sin City
i need more! please update soon
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 08:02PM
Title: Sin City
Good chapter I really liked it. But a high and drunk Justin are not a good thing.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 03:42PM
Title: Sin City
Very cool story. Update soon. Thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: angelpopstar7
Signed
Date: 06/15/05 - 08:06PM
Title: Case of the Ex
Road trip to Memphis! Yeee haw! okay thats about as much country as I have in me....i do have some y'alls tho lol
But back to the story...i think being stuck in a car for 3 days with Justin would just be torture....i mean i love him and all but 3 days non stop....no thanks but at least they went to Vegas for a rest stop...which turned out to be more trouble than it was worth....the whole thing with Carson...i must say i was laughin hysterically cause i knew that she'd do something like that...not sure how i knew but i just did lol...but uh oh Vince is there...hopefully hes not going to be causing problems.....i'm not sure what happened in their relationship before but i'm gettin the sense that he was controlling and I hope that he isn't making Arin do something she doesn't want to...now I'm worried....MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 06/08/05 - 08:41PM
Title: Case of the Ex
she's not gonna be friends with just for long if she's doesn't tell him about her and vince. i would have stopped talking to her along time ago. there's friends w/ benefits, keyword being friends so she should share that with him.
Reviewer: Nikki
Anonymous
Date: 06/02/05 - 07:10PM
Title: Case of the Ex
Ok. Um. No. That was not supposed to happen. The Carson thing. Funny. Vince? No. That's not coo. You better update this again soon because I'm getting heated!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 06/01/05 - 08:50PM
Title: Case of the Ex
All I got to say is damn! That was good wow. Some serious shit is going down.
Reviewer: Ashley
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Date: 06/01/05 - 11:38AM
Title: Case of the Ex
Very interesting little convo they had about JC. I'd like to see what that evolves into. And Elisha is my new favorite in the supporting cast. She's just so... cute! And dude, that Carson scene cracked me up. Justin, that male ego is gonna fuck you up, boy. Though, I must admit that it was sexy the way he got so suddenly brazen. He just would've been stupid as shit to throw any real bows over a chick, so I'm glad it didn't go there. But funny. Yes. And lil' Miss Prince. Hmmm, what could that be about? I dunno. I'm trying not to jump to conclusions, but conversely, I wouldn't blame Justin if he went a little berserk here. What the hell is on her mind? Didn't even bother to tell the boy he was leavin'. *Shakes head* I can only pray that Vince goes in and comes right back out so everybody can just get on the good foot. LOL. Beautiful updates, chica.
Reviewer: Ashley
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Date: 06/01/05 - 11:15AM
Title: Love Soon
The feeling of falling. Ahhh. Sharry, that was a gorgeous chapter. I love the honesty between the two of them. It's something that people of that magnitude usually lose when they get jaded by all the other bullshit they've seen in their lives. I'm glad Arin got away from Marian, 'cause I was ready to throw that woman off a cliff. But instead, Justin beautifully comes to the rescue to try and save her from herself. I love the positive reinforcement that he's become for her. Hell, it's comforting for me and I don't have half the problems that she's got with her mama lol. This should be an amazing trip. Hopefully. You know what, fuck it. I'm calling it Love now.
Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 06/01/05 - 06:24AM
Title: Case of the Ex
Oh man, now I have Mya stuck in my head, too. LOL! Now I love Vince Vaughan, but Arin does not need to get tangled up in that mess again. She seems to be getting too cozy with him, but maybe I'm wrong, and she's going to tell him off once they get to her room. And I'm really afraid that Justin is going to bust down the door and make a big scene. Drama!
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