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Reviewer: Wh!tney
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/05 - 04:11PM
Title: Covered
Oh snap, that was hot
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/05 - 01:58PM
Title: Covered
Now that's not very nice Jordin. But it is a good idea lol. Like everyone says: UPDATE! And YAY! for sex, I'm kinda curious as to how they'll react, whether they'll pretend it never happened or whether they're gonna stay hooked up, I'm hoping they stay together, they obviously enjoy each other's 'company', and each other's company. And how come no one ever gives me huge reviews anymore. PAIGE! I'm looking directly at you lol.
Now UPDATE! Please...
Reviewer: J-Teezy
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/05 - 12:30PM
Title: Covered
Okay, you are forgiven for not posting when you said you would. Because you majorly delivered in the smut/erotica department. I guess I have no choice but to love you again. And I'm with Ash. I'm scared that all this camaraderie and happiness will soon be lost on the awkward after-the-hookup period where you wanna say something, but only if something is said first. Arin doesn't strike me as the type to care so much about sex, but I never would've thought that she'd be scared of a little rain and thunder (by the way, Aww) so she's just proving to be full of all kinds of surprises. And that crazy bastard, Justin... well I'm still trying to figure him out. If he was weird enough to be with someone for 2 years Just Because, then he's got his own set of fucked up issues that even I can't comprehend. I guess we will soon see the effects of the not-so one night stand on a couple of uncertain buddies. And it better be soon, Sharry. Or next time, I'm giving this story a freakin' 1. And then you'll be sorry.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 01/20/05 - 08:53AM
Title: Covered
Yeah, so I most certainly didn't see that coming! THANK YOU. You just made my morning. What an endearing chapter. I think I can see the plot thickening here - a whole lot of honesty coming into play: Arin and her not-so-vindicated Vince past; Justin and his 3275927 fears lol. And now that we've thrown sex into the mix, I definitely think we've got the makings of a beautiful story here. And if I know you, it's gonna be nothing short of spectacular. I'm excited! The way those two operate, you'd think that sex wouldn't have to change everything but they certainly get into their weird modes, so I'm kinda wary of seeing what comes out of 'the morning after.' Hopefully, they'll just do it again and again until they fall in love and have lots of babies. ::Hint, Hint.::
When I saw the title of this chapter, I immediately thought of Covered In Rain. I'm so psychic. :D
Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/05 - 07:39AM
Title: Covered
Well, at least she isn't afraid of whales! LOL!
Justin's a sweetie for coming over and offering some support. I hate thunder, so I'm feeling Arin's fear. And he brought Chinese ... :drool: I'd have a hard time deciding whether to eat him or the wonton. Yum!
Thank God they finally had sex. ROFL! I mean, dude, I don't read stories unless there is sex in the first few chapters. I need to know that my attention is going to be held. And held it you did with the stroking and slidding. Both popular words in my vocab. Hehehe.
I hope things aren't weird in the morning cuz you know the morning after with a new sexual partner can be odd ... not that I would know, but I imagine so.
Okay, buh-bye. MOOOORE!
Author's Response: Well, at least she isn't afraid of whales!
So not funny, Paige. lol
Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/05 - 03:03PM
Title: Prologue pt. I - Prince's Princess
I'm gonna hit you if you don'r update soooooooon. That is all. Ha!
Reviewer: alex
Anonymous
Date: 12/23/04 - 10:28AM
Title: Prologue pt. II - A Rush of Blood to the Head
i love it. i really did like the way u started this story and i love the last two lines with her waiting for that 'cute guy' to call her. i can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Miss JT
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/04 - 09:03PM
Title: Prologue pt. II - A Rush of Blood to the Head
You used my song! Oh and also, umm, I love this! I love the way they interact. I'm glad he didn't go over there acting like the fucked up pimp that so many people think he is, and I'm glad she didn't come off as the quote-unquote ''black (or biracial) bitch'' lol. I've seen too many of those stories. See, this is why I'd do you, Sharry. You're so original lol. No for reals, I hope they keep this up. I like it.
And to even further the Camstin Convo, I gotta say that I like the way you depicted them, too. It's a good, realistic, non-negative way to say that they weren't really together. But I wouldn't know anything about that. ::Wink, Wink:: So uh, how long do I have to wait for an update?
Reviewer: It's Jordin, biatch!
Anonymous
Date: 12/17/04 - 08:49PM
Title: Prologue pt. I - Prince's Princess
So, I'm pretty sure that I told you I loved it way back in... what was that, August? I still do. I like this chick. Beauty, brains, a deal with Versace. You're really writing this story about me, aren't you? I'm flattered, Sharry! No, but seriously, I think lil' Miss Arin is about to give Justin a run for his money, and I got myself a front row seat! She's a bad mammajamma. Just as fine as she can be! I said I wouldn't read this 'til you were done, but you know I couldn't stay away. Keep the hot shit comin', SharBear!
Reviewer: angelpopstar7
Signed
Date: 12/16/04 - 02:36PM
Title: Prologue pt. II - A Rush of Blood to the Head
Ahh yes the whole 'I'mma chill with them cause they're cool and those other people aren't' oh yes....i know that all too well lol...not that i do that or anything...unless its a guy and hes hot shoot then i'm there but back to the story...i'm hooked on it! Like Ash said, i loved how they put each other down but then just laughed about that...i admire that in people. MORE PLEASE!
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