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Reviewer: Mellisa
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 04:49PM
Title: None
I think it got kind of confusing when you switch POV but then I caught on. I kinda like it better coming from Cassie though. But it's cool hearing what other people think. It just has to be organized better. It was kinda of confusing when you switched. Maybe more spaced between paragraph for each character?
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 04:22PM
Title: None
You have to update soon! I wanna know her story!! Aah! And either way of writing is fine for me, whether it be switching point of views or not. Just UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 04:06PM
Title: None
What Helena said.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 03:58PM
Title: None
DAMN YOU LAURIE! BOOOOOOOOOO! Your stupid great story is really turning out to be addictive, and I thought I had a damn update. Booooooooooooooooooooooo! Oh, and I liked the switching of conciousness. Unless it's easier for you to write in just Cassie's point of view. Oh, and UPDATE! :p
Reviewer: jumpupjump
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 03:42PM
Title: None
Gof or it. I thought itw as interesting the way you did it. Also, it gives us insight as to what the other main charachters are thinking and feeling. I trust ya. Yuo're a great author, so I think you'd make it work.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 01:53PM
Title: Screwed
You just love toturing us don't you huh? I think we should all get together stalk and toture you until you tell us what she told him.
Author's Response: I do love it, yes. I don't love ME getting tortured as much though...should I tell y'all what happened? Well...NAH!! lol
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/07/05 - 01:40PM
Title: Screwed
Do I have to twist your arm to find out what happened to her? Cause you know I will!!! And what the hell is up with Justin?? I'm not appreciating his complete asshole personality. Whatever Cassie told him (which we BETTER find out about in the next chapter...) should not be something he uses to his advantage! Ugh, why doesn't he just get dick tattooed on his forehead??
Author's Response: Christina, threatening bodily harm does not make me wanna tell you what happened, lol. Justin is an asshole, plain and simple. But he won't always be...maybe...as for finding out in the next chapter...well, that would make it much too easy!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/07/05 - 11:53AM
Title: Screwed
Damn it Laurie! I wanna know what happened to Cassie. And Justin better not manipulate her in any way shape or form or I will kick his arse personally! Update pretty please
Author's Response: I dunno. Justin is pretty tough. Ya might not be able to take him alone....
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 10:22PM
Title: Knowing
Update soon!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 05:54AM
Title: Knowing
This is getting deep... and yet I still like it. Well done Laurie, you have acheived the impossible lol. Justin, Cassie, and even Mel are really showing different sides to their character and it's getting me really into the story. Good work my dear!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was kind of afraid people would think they were being too out of character.
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