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Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/05 - 01:24AM
Title: Chapter 2
Sweet story, had me giggling a few times. Its going to be enjoyable, update soon! :)
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 01/18/05 - 05:29PM
Title: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!! Please update!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 01/18/05 - 04:21PM
Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far. This Kyle character is a trip! LOL!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/05 - 12:09PM
Title: Chapter 2
I think this story is awesome and I love your use of dialogue..it really drives the story. Kyle is freakin hilarious! And I can't wait to see what happens with Justin and Tayolr!
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 01/18/05 - 10:57AM
Title: Chapter 2
to be honest its an alright story dont get me wrong it totally has a lot of potential but i think there just needs to be some more 'depth' and space out the dialogue...its too clumpy
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 01/18/05 - 09:46AM
Title: Chapter 1
I really, really like the beginning of this, I think it's gonna be a great one! Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!
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