I don't wanna have to say aww, but...yeah, AW! Keisha is so funny, always putting Justin in his place, and Justin is just a little cutie. Those two work very well together, especially at Justin's insistence to call her "honey" even though he knows she's not a bee spit, or whatever the hell Keisha was saying to him! lol I almost don't want to read on in case anything goes wrong with this fantastic couple...I say almost...lol
Author's Response: With my excellent reading skills I completely skipped over the almost and was like 'nooooooo....don't stop reading.' lol Then I read the second almost, which was the first for me. And I was like 'huh?' lol But anyways, that's good that you're going to continue reading. And things going wrong is what makes it interesting. ;)
Reviewer: nini22
AnonymousDate: 05/04/05 - 04:22PM
Title: Mr. Toilet, Lies & the Mouth That Spews Out and Into Both
I've been away for a few days so I had to look for stories I missed. I was glad to see this story was updated. I knew that something like this was gonna happen, justin should have told k what happened before sandy told her. I'm glad she hit him because he did deserve it. I just wish that k would have confronted sandy's blonde ass in the driveway now that would have been good lol
Author's Response: Well I'm glad to see you back! Yeah, that would have been interesting. First K yells bitch (cause that's the only way to start a girl fight lol) and of course she'd already have her hair pulled back, vaseline on, earrings off, maybe even have some rings on her fingers...lol Okay, I'ma shut up now. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/03/05 - 02:04AM
Title: Mr. Toilet, Lies & the Mouth That Spews Out and Into Both
wow, talk about needing to edit shit--i think my review had like 80 typos. so, i think I'M the one that needs to edit stuff lmao. it's like 3:00 am in the morning though, if that's any excuse. LoL!
Author's Response: lol It's all good. I think it's safe to say my crown for being the Typo Queen is still mine. But I guess you can be the princess if you want to. lol
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 05/03/05 - 02:02AM
Title: Mr. Toilet, Lies & the Mouth That Spews Out and Into Both
Oh my god, I didn't even know that you updated yesterday! But lucky me, I came and checked and you did. HHHHHEh. Well of course it was worth it, and even if you didn't edit it, I didn't notice. :p Gah. Sandy is annoying. It really bugs me how she keeps showing up on Justin's doorstep every other mother fucking second. I kept expecting it to be K, but no SANDY SANDY SANDY. Until finally K does show up, and what does dumb ass Justin do? Lie to her face. Oh what an dumb, idiot. He could have told her. GAH. LoL. Now when she finds out, it's just gonna be oh so much more worst. At least he knows he deserves it, but ugh. Oh and by the way, when Justin was drunk and saying "snoop doggy dogg dogg" and all that....LMFAO. That was so funny. You're great. I think I wrote you like a damn novel, so I'm gonna shut up now. LMao. Nice chapter. I guess you we're even now. :D
Author's Response: Write me 'damn novels' all the time, I love long reviews! lol Your reviews are hilarious.lol Yes, Justin is an idiot right now. I was hoping y'all would like that. I like to sprinkle in some humor admist the drama. lol And I'm glad we're even now, cause I read what you said about me owing you two chapters...and I was like 'Oh lawd, she's trying to kill me.' lol :)
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 05/02/05 - 07:17PM
Title: Mr. Toilet, Lies & the Mouth That Spews Out and Into Both
That was so good I've got to have some more.
Author's Response: lol Well I'll give y'all some more...eventually. lol Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 05/02/05 - 05:18PM
Title: Mr. Toilet, Lies & the Mouth That Spews Out and Into Both
When is he going to tell her?! The longer it takes him to, the harder it's going to be on K... Update again soon please, I love this story.
Author's Response: I can't tell you that. You're just going to have to read and find out. lol And I'll try to update relatively soon. No promises. :) Thanks for the review, glad to know you're still liking it.
Reviewer: Danielle
AnonymousDate: 04/24/05 - 11:04PM
Title: Never the Twain Shall Meet
i know there gonna be a fight. i'm not trying to stereotype any black woman b/c i am but i know she's gonna get that girl. she gonna bitch out justin for not tellin her about it and that chick for lyin and rubbin it in her face. i mean what kind of boyfriend is that asshole to do something like that. i thought justin was cool but he's messin' up right now.
Author's Response: Black, white, purple or blue...you mess with my man, now I gots ta cut you! lol Don't ask me where that came from. I'm weird, I know. Anyways thanks for letting me know what you think. Es muy appreciated-o.
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 04/24/05 - 07:03PM
Title: Never the Twain Shall Meet
Sandy is a manipulative little bitch and Keisha just fell into her trap. And yes Justin needs to com clean now!
Author's Response: And the award for most hated character in "Everything In Between" goes to.... (drum roll, please)...Sandra D. Owens! lol Si, it is time for Justin to fess up, before someone else does. Thanks for the review, thought I'd lost ya there for a minute. lol But why'd ya have to say "come clean"?!? Now I got that Hilary Duff song stuck in my head. lol Thanks a lot Gigi! :\ jk
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 04/24/05 - 01:30PM
Title: Never the Twain Shall Meet
"Wait, but if she wasn’t here, then where exactly was she? Mars would be nice. I heard it’s beautiful this time of the year."
LMFAO. That was funny. And I think that just about sums it all up for me. :p :p
Author's Response: lol Glad you liked that...I'd just randomly added it in right before I posted it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 04/24/05 - 01:26PM
Title: Never the Twain Shall Meet
Ewww--what the fuck? I take back being sorry for that bitch. She just told all that shit to K and didn't even act like she knew her, when she knew damn well she did and what she was doing. Now K isn't dumb and she's gonna obviously figure out that she was talking about Justin the whole entire time. What a slut! Lmao. She just....bugs. Can she go.....awaaaaaay? Like seriously, what a SLUT. hahahaha.....ahem, sorry. And Justin? What a damn moron. He keeps spacing off, and he needs to just tell K before he gets caught---like he's going to soon enough!! :( *tears* Please update soon! I love this story, lmao.
Author's Response: lol Dang, you must really hate Sandy now. Not that she doesn't kind of deserve it. Sorry, Sandy will be here for a little while longer. About Justin...he's still not sure how to tell K and really he's kinda hoping that he won't have to. But I'm glad you're still liking it, despite how much it's obviously frustrated you. :)
