Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 05/13/05 - 06:31AM
Title: A Tempting Closing Statement
That chapter was too cute! Justin and K are adorable together, but he better tell her about the kiss. I'm kind of looking forward to K kicking his ass though :)
Author's Response: Telling her would be smart, exactly why he's not doing it. lol Justin really is intelligent...just...sometimes he hides it a little too well. :) Thanks for the review!
Oh my goodness---could this mean that I OWE you a chapter now? Girly you can't be updating like this---I can't keep up. :P But anyways, what the HELL? IS K NUTS? OF COURSE she should move in with Justin. (Lmao, although I can't help but think as the knowledgble reader that I am, that she will pretty soon be hatin JT when she finds out about his sneaky lips and where they've been). But anyways....what the hell? She should still move in with him--cus um yeah...it's JUST Justin! LMAO. = ) OH and by the way? My favorite part of this chapter? The first opening lines where we found out that BITCh--oops I mean SANDY, had finally disspearred outta JT's life just as quickly as she'd entered it. LMAO. *joy* Why do I have the horrible feeling that bit---eeeeer Sandy will be back though? HOE!!! lmao..ahem ok I'm done .
Author's Response: YES! Finally you owe me one! You owe me...it does have a nice ring to it, doesn't it? lol And don't worry, this last update was a fluke I doubt it'll happen again so you'll have plenty of time to update 'Joke's On You.' So do you owe me one or two? K's too Miss Independent to become the live-in girlfriend...or at least that's what she's thinking now but Justin ain't giving up that easy. lol Yeah, Sandy did a now you see her, now you don't. *shrugs* Who knows she might make a return though. ;) BTW, I'll be nice and say you only owe me one chapter until I get around to updating again. You owe me...damn, that sounds nice. lol :)
AHH--well i'm FINALLY done with school for this year, so I have some time to finally review everyone's stories that I've been neglecting. Okay, so anyways...oh my GOODness, since when did Trace have such an intelligent litlte brain in that head of his? Justin is such an ass for not listening to him, oh my god--I just wanna smack his pretty face in. LMAO. He knows better than that. He knows GOOD AND WELL that lies always come to bite you in the ass....gah. This boy is so gonna deserve what he gets when K finds out, yet I still think I'll end up being sad for him. LMAO. GRR what a moron. And aww....pooor K that her bff is moving. That sucks. Anyways. YAY. I'm so glad ya updated.... on to review next chapter. :p
Author's Response: I'll let you in on a lil secret...Justin = big dummy, Trace = tiny genius...but shhh, you didn't hear that from me. lol *Justin hears and storms off* J, I was kidding! *sighs* See what you made me do?! lol Are y'all starting to see where the crazy part for my sn comes from? :^)...But seriously, Justin thinks he is doing the best thing right now because the truth hurts and blah, blah...too bad it'll only end up hurting her more by him doing it this way. Slightly Good (partially selfish) intentions, but bad logic. And that's good you're done with school. So am I. "School's Out for the Summer" was stuck in my head for a couple of days before I actually got finished with finals, toward the end I had little to no motivation. And moving out...SUCKS! lol Anyways, as always thanks for letting me know what you think!
Okay, okay...perhaps I can admit that Sandy isn't that bad. She said she recognized K but just wanted to talk, and I suppose that's forgivable because we've all been stuck in a bathroom crying at a party whilst everyone else dances their asses off and has a great time. Horrible feeling. I'm still suspicious, however....anyway, Justin, what the hell are you doing man?! Listen to Trace, he is wiser than he is tall (lol sorry that just came to me) and just tell Keisha what happened! Lying leads to trouble deary....the sooner he understands this the better. On another note, YAY! I've caught up on my reading! Sucks though, because now I have nothing to read...LOL
Author's Response: lol Well I'm glad you're back to slight suspicion when it comes to Sandy instead of complete loathing. lol "Listen to Trace, he is wiser than he is tall"...LOL you're hilarious! But that he is indeed. lol Well that's good you're all caught up...but there's more now. So read, read away! lol Thanks for the review! (side note: wow...that's what 4 or 5 lol's in one reply...my lol habit is getting a lil ridiculous! :\)
Really liked it thought that Trace could talk some sense into him but that didn't work. And now what's K going to do without Nicole I'm sad about that.
Author's Response: Nah, Justin doing the smart thing and listening to Trace - that would be too easy. lol And aww don't be sad...Nicole's not really gone for good...K just got a little too emotional and her mind automatically jumped to her being deserted, she'll explain it better (I hope) in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 05/09/05 - 04:43PM
Title: Losing Gold
Justin is dumb, K is gonna kick his ass but I'm kinda looking forward to it :). You know I'm a drama queen, great chapter!
Author's Response: lol Thanks!
Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 05/08/05 - 08:40AM
Title: Never the Twain Shall Meet
You know what Sandra D.? Long walk off a short plank is what I think you should do. For a moment, I thought she was genuinely upset but no, she was just being the manipulatative (I don't think that's how you spell it but for the momentum's sake I'll leave it) bitch she is. And what's with Justin being a little pussy an not coming clean with K? Come on, Justin, don't get pussywhipped by the bitch! Okay, my daily intake of Everything In Between has provided enough excitement until I get to read the next few chaps tomorrow...
Author's Response: lol Guess nobody likes her now, not that I really left much to like though. But she was genuinely upset though...maybe the next chapter will explain that. Or at least I tried to have the next chapter explain that. lol Who knows if it all came out making as much sense as it did in my head, in print. Anyways, I just added another chapter, not sure if it's going to be 'exciting' or anything. But it's something to tide y'all over until the next one. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 05/08/05 - 08:27AM
Title: So Simple
OH MY GOD! I KNEW THAT STUPID SANDY WAS A MOTHER F-ING WHORE! I honestly thought that I was just being too suspicious of Sandy the hoebag, but turns out...I got it spot on! I am so annoyed! And why the hell didn't JUSTIN pull away? No, no, why the hell didn't Justin pull away and give her a slap for kissing him! I know he doesn't hit ladies but that Sandy bitch is NO lady! Grr grr grr...
Author's Response: lol I really don't know what to say to that, besides that I'm glad that you're so into the story that it's making you feel something. Even if that something happens to be extreme annoyance. lol I love your reviews and thank ya for them! :)
Hmmm...Sandy sounds like trouble. Perhaps I'm just too suspicious, but I can't help but feel a fierce loyalty towards Keisha, so anything that even slightly threatens her position as Justin's girlfriend, well...no me gusta. Of course, she'd hate me referring to her as "Justin's girlfriend" but y'know what I mean...LOL I love this story so far, it's sort of like how mine would be if it was ten times better lol Great work, but as good stories are a bit hard to come by nowadays, I'm saving myself by reading this bit by bit, so I'll read another chapter tomorrow! Sorry, the inner geek has already arranged a rota as to when I'll be reading this...Oh, and now I really want to see The Notebook!
Author's Response: lol Don't worry, I think she'd let it slide. But it's good that feel like you know her well enough to judge what you'd think she'd say and do. lol Maybe I'm doing something right then. :) And you know your story is grrrreat. Cat is for lack of a better word...awesome. But you haven't seen the The Notebook?!? Shame. lol Run to Blockbuster! lol jk No, really it is a good movie though.
Author's Response: "the The Notebook"... Ay dios mio, me and typos... Where's the edit button when ya need it? *sighs* Anyways, like I so carelessly forgot to say before...Thanks for the review!
