Hmmm...Sandy sounds like trouble. Perhaps I'm just too suspicious, but I can't help but feel a fierce loyalty towards Keisha, so anything that even slightly threatens her position as Justin's girlfriend, well...no me gusta. Of course, she'd hate me referring to her as "Justin's girlfriend" but y'know what I mean...LOL I love this story so far, it's sort of like how mine would be if it was ten times better lol Great work, but as good stories are a bit hard to come by nowadays, I'm saving myself by reading this bit by bit, so I'll read another chapter tomorrow! Sorry, the inner geek has already arranged a rota as to when I'll be reading this...Oh, and now I really want to see The Notebook!
Author's Response: lol Don't worry, I think she'd let it slide. But it's good that feel like you know her well enough to judge what you'd think she'd say and do. lol Maybe I'm doing something right then. :) And you know your story is grrrreat. Cat is for lack of a better word...awesome. But you haven't seen the The Notebook?!? Shame. lol Run to Blockbuster! lol jk No, really it is a good movie though.
Author's Response: "the The Notebook"... Ay dios mio, me and typos... Where's the edit button when ya need it? *sighs* Anyways, like I so carelessly forgot to say before...Thanks for the review!
Ooo EEE. This was so cute. I seriously freakin' LOVED the Notebook too lmfao. I watched it like 80 times...*sigh* Don't we all want a Noah?
Anyways...it was sooo cute how Justin tried to be Keisha's Noah. lol.
I'm really lovin' this story so far, and hope you update soon. :p I'm worried about the model lady....:/ lmao...Please don't let her ruin K & J's relationship. haha..
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Author's Response: lol Yeah, I loved that movie too! And I'm not usually into those kind of movies, but that one was special. Mmmhmm, I'd definitely want a Noah lol...but then who wouldn't? Glad you liked it and I'll try to update soon. Feedback always motivates me to update quicker and I've definitely been lacking the motivation this last week. lol So thanks for the review! Oh and I can make no promises about what Sandy might or might not do. ;)
this is a really good story. they are really cute, update again soon :)
Author's Response: Could it be? I got a new reader? Alright, I was going for a rhyme there...but it obviously didn't work. I guess I could have said "Could it be? Another new reader for me?" lol Anyways, thanks for the review. Mucho appreciated-o.
