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Reviewer: Cherry
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/05 - 12:50AM
Title: The Begining of the End
Well done... I really liked it! I was amazed about the ending, and I think you should have mentioned something earlier in the story about Anais and Justin having sex, that way it wouldn't have confused some people. Other than that, well done!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 03/10/05 - 03:06PM
Title: The Begining of the End
A sad ending, not the one I wanted but hey, I'm sappy like that :) I really hope she can either move on from Justin or atually be with Justin in a sequel...hint hint...lol Great story, well done
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 10:05PM
Title: The Begining of the End
Please make a sequel : )
Reviewer: Superman
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 11:42AM
Title: The Begining of the End
This story has a good ending, Trace needs to talk to her so she can woman up and steal j.
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 06:07AM
Title: The Begining of the End
Trace needs to set them up. Good up date
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 01:37AM
Title: The Begining of the End
Hey i've been reading this story and i'm confussed when did they sleep together
Author's Response: LOL it was sumthing that happened before the story starts. It's basically the reason she fell for Justin. You know how things go when you have sex.
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 03/06/05 - 12:41AM
Title: The Begining of the End
it was alright....there could have been more to the story...there was really no concept other than a chick wanting to hook up wit Justin,but never does...its been played over and over again....
Author's Response: I'm going to do a sequal so it will be a long story. Thanks for the feedback though.
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/04/05 - 11:56AM
Title: Wonder
Cute, keep it up!
Reviewer: Superman
Anonymous
Date: 03/03/05 - 12:05AM
Title: Wonder
I like the story so far, i cant wait 4 more keep then comming
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/05 - 09:27PM
Title: Wonder
Wow so are they gonna talk about this anytime soon. Anais wants this boy so bad and he wants her
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. :-)
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