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Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/05 - 09:21PM
Title: The Call
Whoo, this sounds really interesting.
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/05 - 08:48PM
Title: The Confrontation
I'm loving the story so far
Reviewer: Cherry
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/05 - 01:39PM
Title: WHY?
I love the chapter "Why?", but I'm thinking you should use a spell check. You don't misspell a lot of words, just a few that may get some people confused. I thought the whole Anais' mom calling was funny, lol.
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 02/19/05 - 09:13AM
Title: The Call
LOL Sorry to be back, but I accidentally gave it a rating or 8, and I just meant to leave it at 10 lol!!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 02/19/05 - 09:11AM
Title: Tonight/In the Morning
This is a really great story, but I think you would really benefit from just spacing it out a little. I know some people don't like reading great chunks of writing and might bypass your story when they see so much writing, which would be a shame, because it really is great and hilariously funny!!! And she shouldn't worry, I dream about Justin taking of my clothes all the time...lol!!! The style is great, just a few very minor changes in the spacing. Otherwise, fabulous start =)
Reviewer: Cherry
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/05 - 11:30PM
Title: Tonight/In the Morning
I'm liking it. Needs some editing and stuff, but it's very cute and funny. :)
Reviewer: Wh|t
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/05 - 12:48PM
Title: Tonight/In the Morning
I like. BUT work on spacing/paragraphs and longer chaps por favor
Reviewer: Cherry
Anonymous
Date: 02/07/05 - 12:27AM
Title: The Confrontation
Hey, doll! I love the story so far. It's funny and cute and it kept me wanting to read. It needs some work, but all in all it was pretty good! Keep it up!
Reviewer: Angel
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/05 - 09:40PM
Title: The Confrontation
Nice, nice! Needs a lil work but its kool. I just luv the nickname "Snuggles" LOL cute!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/05 - 02:54AM
Title: The Call
Can't wait to see how this is going to turn out.
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