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Reviewer: dreamz28721
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/05 - 07:57PM
Title: Getting Laid Is Half the Battle
this is a good chapter, no matter what you say girl! I hate it when you put down your writing. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Keep it up!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jelli
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/05 - 10:59PM
Title: Getting Laid Is Half the Battle
I finally got a chance to read this again, and I really like what you've done. JC and Allison are so cute together! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, LOL... Buckle up, things are about to get rocky... Much Love, Me OUT
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/05 - 09:41PM
Title: Getting Laid Is Half the Battle
Awww cute chapter. I love the relationship between Allison and Justin. Oo I can't wait to see what happens during their trip to New York, should be fun. They seem like they cause alot of trouble together. Allison and JC are cute together too. I'm really enjoying this story. Great job!! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks... Sorry about the name mix up in the beginning of that chapter, I guess my leading ladies' names are too close together... I am glad you are liking the story and I hope you will like what I have planned for it. Much Love, Me OUT
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/05 - 08:28AM
Title: A Declaration
Ok I just finished reading the 8 chapters. And I must say AMAZING!! I love this story. I love all the characters, the setting,plot, i love it all. Sad story but so suspensful and brillant. I love the relationships and everything that has happened. Wow simply wow. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. LOL. I am glad that you are liking it. I have fallen in love with the characters too, they kind of have a mind of their own right now. I will update as soon as I get a chapter out for the other story!
Reviewer: Mariah111384
Signed
Date: 03/15/05 - 09:43AM
Title: Answers
This story sounds like its heading in the right direction. It's funny, I can relate :D. Update soon.
Reviewer: Kerri, the bestest and most awesomest person EVAH!
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/05 - 11:12PM
Title: Answers
Ahhh, tis a good story! Keeps you interested, keeps you laughing, and it even has the potential for tear-jerking. And, what can I say, I love the witty banter! I just like *saying* that word... two words... witty banter. Hee ^_^ Anyways, I really liked it, yo. Keep up the good work! Else I'll hound you cause I know you in real life MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Reviewer: Gina
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/05 - 08:23AM
Title: Wake Up Call
I can't believe that is all you wrote for this chapter. Every word was top notch but you leave me hanging on the last word...that is rough. This story is amazing, I am attached to Allison, Justin, JC and their triangle...please write another chapter ASAP! :)
Author's Response: LOL!! Sorry about that, I surprised this chapter turned out as well as it did. I was kinda all blocky and it jsut came to me while I was trying to do homework. More is to come, fear not, I won't leave you hanging too long.
Reviewer: jelli
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/05 - 12:53AM
Title: He Knows
Thank you for breaking up the paragraphs, it's so much easier to read. I like it, keep it comin'.
Author's Response: I will continue the story as soon as I finish the ten page paper that I have to write for Sociology. Thank you for you input, I love it.
Reviewer: jelli
Anonymous
Date: 03/06/05 - 03:40PM
Title: Confessions
It looks interesting, but it's a little hard to read. Maybe you could put spaces b/w paragraphs to break it up some.
Author's Response: I fixed up the spacing, I hope that makes it easier on everyone. Thank you for the review, keep them coming. Out.
Reviewer: me
Anonymous
Date: 02/27/05 - 04:55PM
Title: Confessions
A little long, but I am intrigued about where this is going, please update...
Author's Response: Thank for the review, you sure seem lonley. But hey, I broke up the chapter into two, so hopefully that makes it a little easier on everyone.
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