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Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 08:49PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Aw, I'm not first, oh well :( That could turn out to be a bad idea Justin, but while Elli is thinking, I'll step in, mmk? You can corrupt me. :D Oh, I'm sorry, caught up in the moment there. AHEM, yea so, that could easily backfire, but I see where he's coming from, Elli should step up too if she wants it to work. Who knows, I sense drama though. PLEASE let Trace get with Elisha, gosh he PUNCHED Justin..just man..he needs to get it together, I understand protectivness of Elli but learn to BACK down lol Ok, that's all for now lol More soon!
Author's Response: We can't all be first :( LOL! Don't worry you're review means just as much to me whether you're the very first reviewer or the the last. Anywho, back to what you actually said about the story. I'm sure Justin would love to have you step in for Elli in the corruption department, LOL! It's nice to see that you're looking at the situation from both Justin and Elli's POV. Most readers tend to only sypethize (spelled that wrong--too lazy to fix it) with just one of the characters. I just updated right before I came to respond to this so go check it out. Thanks!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 05:27PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
how could she not?
That goes for me too, he wouldn't even have to ask me to kiss him, I'd be all over his ass! I hope Trace and Elisha get back together so Justin and Elli can get their groove on! Great update!
Author's Response: LOL! I can imagine....Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:46PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
I agree with Hollie on points 1&2. Oh yeah and update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:34PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
1) Please tell me Trace and Elisha are back together and Trace is going to quit obsessing. 2) MEN. We can't talk about our feelinsg so let's punch them out... 3) what's the betting Elli ends up in more tears because Justin appears to have stopped kissing her??? Grrrrrrrrrrr these people frustrate me *lol*
Author's Response: 1) You'll have to wait until the next update (at least) to find out if Trace and Elisha are back together. And even if they do get back together that doesn't neccisarily mean that he will back off Elli and Justin. 2) Dido to what you said.... 3) Tears are very possible but don't underestimate her just yet. She may prove to be more....I mean less shy and innocent than you think. 4) Thanks a bunch for reviewing and reading!!!! :)
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:27PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
something like that happened in a story i read before
Author's Response: What happened in a story you read before? The whole thing or just a small part? I hope that you still liked the chapter...
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 12:55PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
haha Elli will have to go and 'get it' that's good, Justin has been the one doing everything.
Can't wait for the next chapters! YAY. lol
Author's Response: It's about time Elli did some work, right? LOL! Hopefully Justin will be able to hold out until she's ready to iniciate. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 12:37PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
I think that she can hold out longer than he could and longer that he thinks, however his little lesson might send the wrong signals and she may think that he doesn't wanna be with her. The next few chappies shall prove most interesting, so please, please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Yes the next chapters shall be quite interesting. Justin just never thinks his little plans all the way through and they nearly always end up back firing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/08/05 - 11:04PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
maybe you should have ellie or justing smack trace with a pillow. Next time justin should just lock his door.
Author's Response: Locking the door would be a pretty simple solution to thier little problem wouldn't it? Too bad Justin wasn't able to think of that. Although, Trace probably would have just pounded on the door until they opened up. LOL! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 08:38PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Super cute I just read it over agin! Damn! Get Trace a girl for gods sake! I knowhe's worried about Justin pressurin' Elli but give them some room please! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Awe, I could just squeeze you to death! You are just too nice--readin' that chapter again. Just makes me want to smile. Thank you!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 08/08/05 - 09:53AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Have no fear, your lazy ass reader is here! lol Anyways, Trace needs a girlfriend, real bad. That should be one of Justin's goals from now on, unless he wants Trace to keep poppin up at the most inopportune moments like he is. And what's up with him and Elisha? They need to get together if only so that will distract Trace long enough so Justin can begin to corrupt our lil' Elli. :D I mean, it's like Justin 'corruptin' someone is a bad thing...who wouldn't want that? haha And Steve...I have a feeling he's gonna be a problem in the future for their relationship. Maybe something even as horrible as walking in on the two of them together or something. ...I want some s'mores now, dammit! The closest thing I've ever had to a real one was those s'mores flavored Pop Tarts. lol Well since I'm back, you know what the means, right? Now you get the pleasure of writing another chapter! haha :D Update soon!
Author's Response: Yay!!! My "lazy ass reader" is back!!! I've missed you bunches! I think just about every other person has said the same thing about Trace needing to back off and in time he will....I think. ;) How insightful of you to think of the possible future problems with Steve--very observant of you. *wink, wing*. After writing that chapter I really wanted a s'more too. LOL! Oh I'm so glad that I know have the pleasure of writing another chapter just for you. :) Thanks so much for reviewing--love it!. Another update will be posted shortly.
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