Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 08/07/05 - 09:57PM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

I've been M.I.A. for a while, but it's good to be back. OMG, can Trace please stop being a cockblocker! Not that Justin's trying to get her in bed, but if they're ever going to have a relationship, Trace needs to back down. It's really cute that he's overprotective, but he needs Elisha to help take his mind off of other people's love lives. Please update soon!

Author's Response: "Cockblocker"--???? Where do you come up with this stuff? LOL! Anywho, you are right about Trace needing to give them some space in order for them to start a real relationship. If only someone could explain that to him.....Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 08/07/05 - 07:37PM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Awww they are so cute!!! Trace needs ro chill out. LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 08/07/05 - 01:00AM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Oh, shit. I messed up AGAIN.. Okay I promise...I'm shutting up now. Even if there are more typos...LOL. I can accept that. Sorry I clogged up the review space. LOL. Forgive me?

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! You are too funny. :) Laughing...


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 08/07/05 - 01:00AM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Damn...I'm lovin IT. I'm love IT. Learn how to type, Jess! *Dies*

Author's Response: LOL! I knew what you meant.


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 08/07/05 - 12:59AM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

HEEEY mama. Oh my, oh my...I'm late on my reviews as always ...BUT. Um, can I just say, Trace, you're annoying as all fuck? LOL. I mean, honestly, why he gotta be all up in Justin's nuts and shit? LOL. It's like---just--back UP. Ahem. Moving on--Justin and Elli are too cute. Whee yaya! Loves it! Oh and this line: “Hey there are plenty of women out there who would pay good money to have me lick them!” I laugh. ROFL....pay? Hmm....that all depends on where I'm payin' you to lick, Mr. Timberlake......Oh my gah, JK. LOL. That was slutty! hahaha. Oopsie. ;) Update soon, cus baaaaadaaat baaaaaaa...I'm lovin' in. =)

Author's Response: LOL! That review was quite random and very funny. Thanks for the laugh. "Hmm....that all depends on where I'm payin' you to lick, Mr. Timberlake......Oh my gah, JK. LOL. That was slutty! hahaha. Oopsie."--LOL! I laughed so hard when I read that. Glad to see you caught up on reviewing and I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the next chapter.


Reviewer: tanya Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 11:51PM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

if i were justin i would of took one of the pillows and smacked him upside the head than told him to get the hell out! great chapter cant wait for more :o)

Author's Response: LOL! A little violent arent' we. :) Thanks for reviewing.


Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 10:17PM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Trace is ruinin' all the cute moments. Awesome chapter! I want to see what happens the during the rest of Elli's stay at Justins house! Update soon!!!!

Author's Response: More is on it's way!!!!


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 01:47PM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

I think dear ole Trace is gett'n a lil jealous, but he needs to get over it. J is his bf so he should let him know how he feels. Trace is buggin' the crap out of me with this but it won't take long for J to confront him. They r soooofreakin' cute 2gether. Him crying and then them holding hands behind Trace's back....sweet. Update soon cause I absolutely love this story. Thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: One would think that Trace and Justin would sit down and talk things out like the rational adults they claim to be. However, they are men and men, at times, tend to be--well---stupid and think that if they share thier feelings thier suddenly gay. As women we know better. Anywho, I'm glad you liking the story and thanks a buch for reviewing.


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 10:21AM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Damnit! Trace what in the heck are you doing?? I think he's jealous, that's why he's constantly ruining Justin and Eli's time. Update soon!

Author's Response: Maybe he is jealous, but the real question is just who/what is he jealous of????? Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: god gave me style Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 09:37AM Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War

Trace is starting to get on my nerves. Why won't he leave them alone? He's jealous and he wants Elli all for himself, that's why. Anyway, Jusitn and Elli are so cute together! I like how Justin is being so sensitive towards her because she's so innocent. Ahh, I love this story! Great job girl!

Author's Response: Trace seems to be getting on everyones nerves. Thanks so much for the compliments!





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