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Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 05:40AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
You know, I love it when I can see writers giving their characters these recurring little tendencies - makes them more real, makes them more rounded. I have decided that Trace's in this story is that he is REALLY NOT SUBTLE. They're just in front of the fire making s'mores, it's not like he's having to pull Justin off Elli's bra.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. You sure know how to make a girl blush with you're wonderful comments.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 12:40AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
now i know i don't review like I are to so for that i'm sorry but I just got to be blunt TRACE IS COCK BLOCKING SOMETHING TERRIBLE ! I'm happy for them and Justin is being a gent like he suppose to . I love this story
Author's Response: Don't worry about not reviewing that much. I'm often guilty of the same thing (just ask Teeny). I'm glad you found time to review this chapter and I look forward to reading more from you....you know, if you have time. :)
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/05/05 - 11:09PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Yay! Am I first? Ugh what is Trace's DEAL? HE's getting on my nerves now. Justin can corrupt Elli if he wants! Hello, he can corrupt me too, it's fun! no, I'm kiddding people, I'm not like that REALLY. They need to tell her mommy and stuff, 'cause I said so. But Elli's gonna be there a week? Woo, I sense makeouts and drama lol Justin crys at Patch Adams awwy, that is a sad movie. And I for some reason, can see him being 'touchy feely' in real life. AND I love s'mores! Ok, good chap. more soon!
Author's Response: You are first! Congrats!! LOL! I'm glad you liked the chapter so much and as far as Trace goes, someone is just going to explode soon and it will probably be Justin and he won't be very nice about it. And since you said that they need to tell Elli's mom about what's going on I guess I'll have to write that into the next chapter......yeah right! ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/05 - 03:06PM
Title: Meeting Momma
poor justin!! LOL
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/05 - 10:57AM
Title: Meeting Momma
Trace's right, Justin is slowly sucking the innocence right outta Elli. Oh yea, pun intended.
Author's Response: "Pun intended."--LOL! Funny girl, very funny. :)
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/05 - 07:07AM
Title: Meeting Momma
Great Trace. Reallllllllllllllllllll subtle. Honestly, men! Lynn was very nice about that, but if Justin thinks he's going to keep the minor thing quiet for 8 months, he's deluded.
Author's Response: I guess that wasn't really smooth was it? But, hey at least he got her out of the house. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/05 - 04:08AM
Title: Meeting Momma
Aww, poor thing. She keeps on embarassing herself. But it's cute. Update soon.
Author's Response: The story just wouldn't be the same if Elli wasn't embarssaing herself in one way or another. :) Thanks so much!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/04/05 - 01:02AM
Title: Meeting Momma
all i can continue to say is ouch.....
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: tanya
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 11:27PM
Title: Meeting Momma
oh gawd! SHE BIT HIS TONGUE!!! ugh that has got to be the most embarrasing thing ive ever heard of. i owuld literally die!
loved it!
Author's Response: I know! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 10:31PM
Title: Prologue
Did I annoy you in my last review or something? You sounded irritated lol Sorry if I did
Author's Response: Of course you didn't annoy me. I don't know why you would think that. I love all of your reviews and I would never get irritated at them. I'm so sorry if you thought that. Your reviews mean a lot to me and I hope you continue to post them.
Author's Response: What exactly did I say that made you think I was irritated with you?
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