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Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 10:26PM
Title: Meeting Momma
Oh wow. that chapter SUCKED. No, I'm just kidding lol I can't beleive she bit his tongue, OWWW! I hurt thinking about. See, I knew Lynn was cool, I see why she was upset now. Ok well, more soon!
Author's Response: LOL! I warned you that chapter was bad. ;) Hopefully this next chapter won't "suck." Thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 09:53PM
Title: Meeting Momma
It was hella funny but i feel so bad for her. it was her first time and then lynn goes and scares the buhjeezes out off her and in response almost bites his tongue off. I soooooo love this story so please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: That would be kind of embarassing wouldn't it? I think I would have literaly died right then and there. Glad your liking and I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 09:41PM
Title: Meeting Momma
Oooooh I want them to make out again. Lynn handled it very well!!!! More updates realllllll soonm please!!!!
Author's Response: That will come with time. You must leave time for Justin's tongue to heal. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 05:16PM
Title: Prologue
I thought that 1st was kissing, 2nd was groping, 3rd was oral and obviously the home run.... *lol*
Author's Response: I don't really know for sure but that sounds about right. LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 12:36PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Just when Elli and Justin were finally getting to first base...(at least I think it's first base, I can't remember LOL) Lynn decides to make a guest appearance! Can't she see there's little she can do to add to the situation? She should just leave them be. Oh, and poor Justin. If someone bit my tongue, I'd smack them down LOL
Author's Response: Dang girl, you're so violent. LOL! I don't know if that's first base or not either but they were defineitly exploring unknown territory. They always get interrupted at the worst times don't they? Anywho, thanks bunches for reviewing.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 04:43PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
It was getting so sensual!! Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! An update is on it's way!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 02:19PM
Title: Prologue
Oh I know what I meant to say - I feel Justin's pain. I did have some idiot clamp down on my tongue with his teeth one time under the delusion it was sexy. Yeah. That was the end of that, I didn;t go out with him again *lol*
Author's Response: Ouch! That sucks that the same thing happened to you. Definitely NOT sexy. LOL! I would say you made the right choice not to see him again. ;)
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 11:40AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
LOL Hilarious. That would be soo painful to have someone bite your tounge. Especially just thinkin how much it hurts when you bite your own. Hahaha they always seem to get interupted that would be horrible. Soo funny I would pay to see something like that. Haha great chapter.
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you found that chapter so amusing and I could make you laugh. I just hope nothing even remotely close to that ever happens to me. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 11:13AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
*lmao* Leave it to Momma Lynn to come in and interrupt things. Hopefully this time, Elli won't run away crying. And hopefully they lie about her age, we don't want the media making Justin out to look like R. Kelly. That would be bad...even though, 17 is the age of consent where I live (or is it 16? hmm). And I swear to Jesus, Mary, & Joseph, Justin better not try to sex Elli up...I'd be highly upset if anything remotely sexual happened between those two.
Author's Response: "And I swear to Jesus, Mary, & Joseph, Justin better not try to sex Elli up...I'd be highly upset if anything remotely sexual happened between those two."-- LOL! Most readers want them to get to doing the nasty already. It's nice to see someone wants to perserve Elli's innocence. :) Even though I agree that nothing should happen I cannot promise that JT won't try anything. We'll see what happens. Thanks for reviewing!.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 11:05AM
Title: The Study Session
See, that is exactly why I never took Physics in high school! Reading that problem made my head hurt. And why did Mr. Timberlake feel the need to take Elli up to his room, just to eat some pizza? *raises eyebrow*
Author's Response: LOL! I hate physics! And Justin didn't take Elli upstairs to eat pizza. He took her up to nap and then brought her back downstiars to eat pizza. Sorry if that was a bit confusing. Anywho, thanks for reviewing!
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