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Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 09:47AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
i can't wait to see if Elli freaks over the tongue or if Lynn flips and if she knows how old Elli is!!! update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: More is coming soon. I'm working and update right now....well not right this very moment because I'm responding to your review, but as soon as I'm done I'll be working on an update. Anywho, thanks for reviewign!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 08:51AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
I loved the chapter, I love dthat Elli seems to be more open and confortable around Justin...
ha I can't wait for her point of view on the french kiss haha
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreicate it!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 05:51AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Ya know, I'm almost hoping Lynn is gasping was for knowing how young Elli is, because if she's still getting shocked and scandalised because her 24 year old has kissed a girl.... in other news, I am thrilled that somebody else uses the word "zonked" because any time I say it I get looked at like I'm nuts
Author's Response: I am thrilled that somebody else uses the word "zonked"--I say that all the time! LOL! It's nice to know that I'm not alone either. Thanks so much for reviewing and I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter.
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 12:43AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Wow, Elli is SO innocent, I mean I'm her age and I'm not THAT sheltered, I'm not a ho either mind you lol Ha, so does Lynn know how old Elli is, if not well Justin's 20 something he can make out with girls in his own house if he wants! lol But when she DOES find out how old she is..UH OH! lol Great chapter, yay for making out! lol Can't wait to see what happens next more soon!
Author's Response: As is evident in previous chapters, Elli's mother has kept her very sheltered so it's really no surpise how innocent she really is. Yes, it should be quite interesting to see just how Lynn reacts to Elli's legal status. Thanks bunches for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 - 11:10PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
That was great. My girl is slowly becoming a woman. Lol. However, did Lynn have to do that? Does she know that she's a minor cause I know she knows that J isn't virginal. This shall be interesting. Funny as hell chica and I loved it. Thanks and update soon. J&B!
Author's Response: Glad you liked! As I've told a number of other loyal reviewers like youself, you'll just have to wait until the next update before you find out if Justin's Mamma knows about Elli's age and just want had her so upset. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 - 11:07PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Whoah, that was a dope ass line ending there. Haha. I loved it. Clever, my dear. Anyways, this story is so cute. =) Elli is such an innocent one, lmao. I'm likin' it so far. I just got caught up though, cus I'm like the slowest reader ever when I try to read a million stories plus write and everything else. Great job hon!
Author's Response: "Whoah, that was a dope ass line ending there"--Thank you very much. I was quite proud at myself for coming up with that line. Not to toot my own horn or anything. LOL! Glad you got caught up and I can't wait to read what you think of the coming chapter.
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/01/05 - 10:27PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
wow does his mom know how old ellie is? hummm...tisk tisk tisk....
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see now won't you?????
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 08/01/05 - 10:09PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Oh Man! That was so great! You know his Mom is really going to give him. I mean she just caught him making out and with an underage girl no less. Oh wow update soon!
Author's Response: Now don't get ahead of yourself here. You don't know if Justin's mamma knows Elli is a minor. You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. LOL! Thanks bunches for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 - 05:02PM
Title: The Study Session
my fav story.....awesome chapter...justin can be my tutor any time...update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you! LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/05 - 06:52PM
Title: The Study Session
Really Justin should offer up his services as a tutor.
Author's Response: I know, right?? :)
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