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Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/05 - 05:40AM
Title: Cht. 34--Part II: Forgotten Details
Sure, Elli neglected to mentiona few details there *lol* They're so cute it hurts...
Author's Response: Awe, thank you! You know you would have left out those embarassing details too....or at least I know I would have. ;)
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/05 - 02:06AM
Title: Cht. 34--Part II: Forgotten Details
Poor Elli is a klutz :( But they had a good time! yay! And they want a another date yay! Great as usual, more soon
Author's Response: Yay! LOL! Thanks for reviewing. More coming shortly.
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 07/26/05 - 12:52AM
Title: Cht. 34--Part II: Forgotten Details
check it out, i'm first...wowers....i want a boyfriend now...tear tear....ugh....even if it's just a gay guy to make out with...dammit any way...loved the chapter....soooooo cute
"she only fell once and tripped maybe three for four times, but that’s really good for her." i feel so bad for her. maybe some class for grace or whatever may help...any way....good job
Author's Response: Congrats on being the first to review this chapter! :) You're not alone with the wanting a boyfriend thing....believe me. Glad you loved the chapter and hopefully you love the next just as much if not more. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 07/25/05 - 12:37PM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
Dang I wish I had a man like that. I miss having a boyfriend do stuff like that for me..Where did all the guys like that go?! Cause seriously I am jealous. That chapter was awesome...just sooo damn cute.
Author's Response: I feel ya....I really do. Writing this stuff makes me want a BF too. LOL! Thanks so much for the compliments.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 07/25/05 - 12:33PM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
C-U-T-E!!!!!!!!! And that is all I have to say...well, that and this sentence. *lol*
Author's Response: LOL! You're cute too. :)
Reviewer: Pinkfairy
Signed
Date: 07/24/05 - 10:47PM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
I love this story! that was cute, the first kiss thing...ahaha, whoo for justin. hott. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :)
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 07/24/05 - 02:40PM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
That’s because you date boys while I’m dating a man. ...And whatta man, whatta man, whatta man, what a mighty good man he is! lol That was cute that she tried to save face on the first kiss thing, even though she only wound up falling back to the truth and then completely missed a perfect opportunity to kiss him. lol Oh Elli, what am I gonna do with you? lol I just don't know. But what I do know is, that they are cute together and this needs to be updated soon!
Author's Response: LOL! I just love reading your reviews. You always leave me laughing or at least smiling. And you know you won't like this story nearly as much if Elli didn't do klutz things like missing the perfect opportunity to kiss JT. Thanks a bunch and an update is coming!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 07/24/05 - 07:54AM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
Yay for men, boo for boys. Justin was so sweet that date, especially when he tried to calm Elli down. I cand only imagine the intense "Oh my God Justin Timberlake is touching me" moment she must have been having, so it was so sweet of Justin to whisper (sexily, I might add, because he is thuper thexy) into her ear to relax. I'm glad it went off without too many klutzy mishaps lol. May it be the first date of many!
Author's Response: "Oh my God Justin Timberlake is touching me"--how appropriate of you to throw in an OMG. LOL! Anyway, glad your liking where the story is going and I can't wait to hear what you think of the coming chapter.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 07/23/05 - 06:07AM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
Well, I'm all for taking it slow and being patient and I think knowing when to do that is a great quality in a guy... but I'm utterly amazed that he didn;t just get exasperated and kiss her himself seeing as she was so not picking up on the signals *lol*
Author's Response: You probably would have just jumped him huh? LOL! Justin's just trying to take it slow for Elli's sake and not rush her into anything she may not be quite ready for. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: You probably would have just jumped him huh? LOL! Justin's just trying to take it slow for Elli's sake and not rush her into anything she may not be quite ready for. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Don't know why that posted twice????
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 07/23/05 - 01:31AM
Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment
yea, that's how I like my updates, Quick, fast and in a hurry! Keep it up! lol Ahem, let's see..Oh she doesn't like veggies?! I LOVE vetgetables! I just had a thing of mixed ones the other day lol Aw, I want Justin to be romantic with me :( Elli got her man, huh? Well go on girl! Cute update, more soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Nice to know about your love for vegetables--valuable information. ;) I have to say I'm with Elli on this one. I eat like no veggies....or at least anything greeen with the exception of pickles. Anywho, thanks for reviewing!
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