Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 07/23/05 - 01:23AM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

Oh. I wish teh flashback was longer lol and give more details. I guess Elli has to start to snap out of her extream shynes and enjoy the ride LOL Jk

Author's Response: Well hopefully you'll get your fill of details in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 07/23/05 - 12:12AM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

That was so great especially that scene by the pool where there looking up at the stars breath taking.

Author's Response: Thank you!


Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/23/05 - 12:12AM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

I know how Liz felt. I swear to goodness I was dying, but I didn't want to skip and ahead and only read the flashbacks. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: LOL! I tend to have that same problem with some other stories I've read. Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 07/22/05 - 10:44PM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

OMG. That was soooo cute. I was like breathing hard the entire time, just waiting to see what happens. Awww, J was a real sweetheart. Please, please update really, really soon. Thanks again. J&B!

Author's Response: You are just too nice. :) Thank you so much. Glad to hear I had you on the edge of your seat.


Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Date: 07/22/05 - 10:28PM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

That was ADORABLE! Great job! Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!


Reviewer: dancewithurheart08 Signed Date: 07/22/05 - 09:46PM Title: A Beautiful Mind For a Moment

aww...the pool scene is mah dream date!!! LOL! awesome update chica

Author's Response: Awe, I would love to have a date like that too. Thanks!


Reviewer: Pinkfairy Signed Date: 07/22/05 - 03:16PM Title: And Then There Were Two

cute story....im lovin it. and uh, yah elli seems to be coming out of her shell (somewhat)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm love to hear that people are loving my story. It makes me feel so wonderful to know I was able to entertain you if just for a bit. Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Pinkfairy Signed Date: 07/22/05 - 02:14PM Title: Please Don’t Squeeze the Charmin

sorry just catchin' up w/ the story....the little girl w/ the tissue n yeah....LOL. made me laugh...alrighty on to the next chapter....

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. Much appreciated!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:43PM Title: And Then There Were Two

Trust a guy to take the pussy's way out and start grilling.... And a Kiss the Cook apron? I HAVE ONE OF THOSE!! Lol I mean, er, no I don't, why the hell would I invest in something so silly... Moving swiftly on lol, Elli seems to be doing well so far, I would have expected her to have fallen over AT LEAST three times by now...LOL Fantabulous update, you know I like 'em speedy!

Author's Response: LOL! I can't believe you have a Kiss the Cook apron too! I thought I was alone....er...I mean I don't have one either. :p As far as Elli not falling yet, let me just remind you that this date has barely begun and the night is still young. Thanks a bunch for reviewing and there is another speedy update on it's way. I just have to finish reply to my reviews....


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:03PM Title: And Then There Were Two

i love this story..i wanna see how the date goes!! ahhhhh.... great.

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks bunches for reviewing!





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