Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 08:41PM Title: None

OMG, I'm so sad for both of them. This was a GREAT story. I always looked forward to a new chapter to Justin and Elli's story. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write a sequel to this, like taking place a few years later when their older and Elli is more mature I don't know just PLEASE write a sequel.


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 05:08PM Title: None

Ugh, I just don't know what to say. I had a horrible feeling that Elli and Justin might break up, but I didn't think so soon! If I think about it rationally, she was a bit too young for him and she needed to mature, but screw rationally, I wanted some hot Justin and Elli love! LOL Oh well, fantastic story, I'll probably read it again and again, and can't wait for your next one!


Reviewer: stimble Signed Date: 10/30/05 - 04:37PM Title: None

so...so... sad i don't like steve...arg....so yeah...i can't believe it's over...tear tear. it was an amazing story. i loved it


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 03:03PM Title: None

I'm still confused as to why Steve was mad. I kept saying everytime...to myself...he's not her father. Ne-hoo! Thank you, thank you, thank you for not having Justin and taint her...let's leave that to the sequel that everyone wants. :o) Aww, poor Elli, her first breakup. Simply smashing dahling!


Reviewer: UNC_FANATIC16 Signed Date: 10/30/05 - 01:05PM Title: Prologue

I really didn't want the story to end that way.....You have to make a sequel please.....Justin couldn't really have been playing her with Allison....Please make a sequel


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 10:05AM Title: None

um....:is speechless: first of that was amazing(ly depressing) and second, you need to write a damned sequel. because, yeah, yeah, even though i may *say* that i want a fanfic to be realistic, i want to be sweet and happy as much as the next person...so, i know you're "done" and everything, but please consider continuing.....:) great job!


Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 09:38AM Title: None

I knew it was gonna end that way but I was hoping it wouldn't.....it still came out awesome even tho they broke up....please please please write a sequel this was my fav story!!!!!!!!!!!!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 04:37AM Title: None

I knew it could never end well but... man, I'm depressed now. Poor Elli. Mighthave been nice if Justin had just given her a little more explanation... and Allison???? Did he lose all notion of taste in the meantime? Sheesh! *lol*


Reviewer: Nance Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 03:02AM Title: None

this story was so wunderful....i really loved readng it! everytime i saw that you updatet i acted like a little kid at christmas! and i really hope that you do make a sequel... i love your writing!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 10/30/05 - 02:18AM Title: None

Yeah a sequel. I like that idea.

Author's Response: LOL!





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