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Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/05 - 01:54AM
Title: Caught
I kid you not ..and you know I don't kid when it comes to things like this. My mouth was open the entired time. And ..yes ..I think I was squealing ..in delight? ..I've never actually squealed in my life. Unless it was like ..JOKING ..but I actually squealed. And then I realized that would be what I'd want my first kiss with Justin to be. If I ever had a first kiss with him ..or maybe even one eye moving to my direction. ...Definitely getting off track. Elli handled it WELL. I mean ..for Elli anyways. She didn't act like a "seventeen" year old ...i'm pretty sure Justin's very aware that she's 17. That definitely wasn't stopping him. I'm so glad ..ya know what. I love this story for it's orignality ..but ALSO ..because you wrote about someone BELOW the age. Ya know ..people write about Justin with a chick the same age as him or older ..but never that much younger. And i'm 6 years younger than Justin, so this obviously makes me very freakin' happy. It's just so original ..because people act like Justin's not human ..and would NEVER ..fall in love with someone who was average and not exactly of age lolol. *rolls eyes* ..HAHA ..But gosh ..Trace shouldn't be so nosey. He shouldve just stayed in the livingroom with his shortass self and twiddled his thumbs or something. BUT i'm nosey like that ..lmao it cracked me up when he was like "it's alittle too quiet" like he expected to find them strangling each other's throats or something. But he got caught ..SEE that's what happens when you're not an expert in spying. I AM. I'm the nosiest person alive. He should've asked me for pointers. ..Okay, I think i've written enough to last you for a couple of weeks. lolol. I LOVES it!
Author's Response: I've saved your review to respond to last because it was sooo long. I love it! Anywho, I laughed through like your entire review. Especially the begining when you said your mouth was hanging open and you were actually squealing. I can't believe my little story actually got a squeal out of you. :) LOL! And you are just too sweet with all the compliments you wrote. I don't even know what to say, but thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you, and thank you again. I'm so glad you are able to relate to this story and the characters in it. I can't tell you how happy it makes me to hear how realistic you think my story is. Oh, you just made my day--no, my week with this review. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 07/13/05 - 11:51PM
Title: Caught
hey, didn't justin and ellie kiss in cap 27....sorry, just asking...but i like the chapter....yay
Author's Response: In chapter 27 Justin gives Elli a slight peck as she's leaving. It was more of a friendly form of affection so we're not really counting that as a real kiss. Hope that cleared things up for ya. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/05 - 11:12PM
Title: Caught
YESSSS!!!! Babygirl got her some tongue action and is slowly learning the ways of love, lol. WHat is this I sense on Trace's psrt? Jealousy or overprotectiveness? Don't care right now, cause they were kissing and I'm so happy. Please, please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: I don't mean to bring your spirits down or anything,but "babygirl" did not get any tongue action in that last chapter. If you reread the chapter, both Trace and Elli comment that the kiss involved no tongue or even open mouth. Sorry to burst your bubbble. :( --Anywho, they were kissing, which is reason enough to rejoice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/05 - 11:00PM
Title: Caught
WOO! Making out! oh yea! Get down! get down tonight! :D Um. *slaps Trace upside the head* Can't let Justin corrupt her?! Is he crazy! It's JUSTIN, ok? Whew. trying break up the love birds. Hmph. I'm glad he and Elisha calmed down a bit. *sigh* **Jealous of Elli* Great update, more soon!
Author's Response: LOL! You are too funny. :) I can't believe you want Justin to corrupt poor, innocent Elli. For shame....just kidding. You know we're all jealous of Elli and anyone would love to be corrupted by Mr. Timberlake. LOL! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 01:01PM
Title: Responding
Well it's about damn time!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woo-hoo!!!!
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 08:36AM
Title: Responding
I want Fire works!!!! LOL
That was soooooooo amazing ! Finally Justin pulled the stick out of his ass and kissed Elli!!! yeah!!!
that was awesome, you better not let us hanging in here. Ya hear? LOL
Author's Response: When have I ever left ya'll hangin? ;) Glad you liked the chapter so much and thank you bunches for taking the time to leave a review.
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/10/05 - 09:04PM
Title: Responding
OH MY GOD!!!! SO AMAZING!! WOO WOO!!! LOL I love doign that. Woo Woo. Honestly thought that was amazing and you have to update soon because I'm going on vacation in 2 days and I want an update...lol...woo wooo
Author's Response: WOO WOO!!!--LOL! I'm working on an update for you, but no promises. I'm trying though. :)
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 12:36PM
Title: Responding
OMG ..I can't feel my legs. I think my whole body just about went numb. I dunno if it was the anticipation build up ..or what ..but since you made me wait so long for that friggin' kiss ..it's like it made it better! That had to have been the most hottest, uplifting ..amazing kiss i've ever read in my life. I literally stopped breathing ..it was ..I can't explain it. But what I can say is ..IT'S ABOUT FRIGGIN TIME! But knowing Justin ..this happiness i'm feeling won't last long. He'll do something else ..or furthermore i'm afraid Elli won't know how to react. I just feel like something bad's gonna happen. But for NOW ..i'm just gonna revel in the bliss of what is Justin and Elli ..and plan out their wedding. Is tomorrow good for you? lololol ..Great as always! I don't think I could love you or this story anymore than I already do!
Author's Response: OMG....another extra long reviewing from you--you know I love it. :) Wow, I can't believe my writing had that big of an effect on you. I can't tell you great I felt after reading your review--major ego boost. :) As far as your feeling that somthing bad is going to happen, I wish I could assure you that nothing will, but.....I can't do that. Uh, a wedding for Justin and Elli scheduled for tomorrow? I'll have to check my calandar. LOL! Thanks so much for the awesome review!
Reviewer: Maggie
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 10:30AM
Title: Responding
OMG! FINALLY IT HAPPENS!! Geez, could Justin have made her cry anymore, poor girl... but YAY for the kiss!
Author's Response: FINALLY!--That's what everyone's saying. Thanks for reading, much appreciated.
Reviewer: dancewithurheart08
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/05 - 08:22AM
Title: Responding
yay! happy happy happy...joy joy joy. LOL yeah sorry bout that moment; went back a few years..the point is FINALLY! lol! awesome chapter
Author's Response: LOL! Loved the chant. Thanks!
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