Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 06/28/05 - 09:57AM Title: Freakin' Your Freak!

Cute! lol

Author's Response: Thanks!


Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous Date: 06/26/05 - 06:22PM Title: Tolerance

I love this story! I can't wait til your next update... I hope it's soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!


Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl Anonymous Date: 06/25/05 - 08:33PM Title: Prologue

i am falling in love with this story. mostly because it deals with the topic mine does: justin and a minor but also because it is so damn good! usually i'm not a confrontational person but if i had seen jt sucking face with that slut it would've been on! seriously! lol. it was friggin hilarious when they watched model behavior, too. that movie was extremely corny. now you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. what's gonna happen next? update. now lol. please?

Author's Response: Awe, thank you. I went a read your story after I read this review and I just love yours. You should get to updating it, lol. Thanks so much for the review and I'm glad you are enjoying it so much. ;)


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 06/25/05 - 04:04AM Title: Tolerance

I think she should stay mad a little longer. Justin doesn't feel NEAR as bad as he should. Ew, he slept w/ skany Alison after she was rude to Cat and accused her and his best friend of some nasty stuff. He should feel worse! lol And uh oh I wonder what he's gonna say when he sees Cat and Trace? Hopefully he learned his lesson about getting snappy at people for no reason, but I doubt it, he's an idiot lol Update soon, I wanna know what happens!

Author's Response: I just have to start off my response by correcting you (sorry). The main character in this story name is Elli not Cat, lol. Were you reading This Love before you reviewed mine? Anywho, thanks for reviewing and an update is coming!


Reviewer: god gave me style Anonymous Date: 06/24/05 - 11:57AM Title: Tolerance

Uh oh, some shit is about to go down. I can feel it...

Author's Response: LOL!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 06/24/05 - 12:33AM Title: Tolerance

Trace is such a dumbass, getting himself burnt like that...LOL Anyway, I also think Trace is getting himself a little crush. He might not, and I don't think he likes Elli as much as Justin does, but there is definitely something about the way he talks about her that makes the romantic inside of me go "hmmm..." But again, maybe I'm just jumping to conclusions! Steve was a lot less irritating in this chapter, I like how he acknowledges that he's not Elli's dad, and he seems to understand her better than her mom. Anyway, get to updating again!! lol

Author's Response: Trace definatly care about Elli a lot and some of those protective-big-brother feelings may be escalating but Trace in on a mission and he won't let his feelings get in the way.....or at least I hope not. Mwwahh!


Reviewer: Nikki G Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 05:40PM Title: Tolerance

Justin better step up to the plate...SOON. Update soon cause I'm lovin' this story. Thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Oh he'll be stepping pretty soon...


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 02:19PM Title: Tolerance

Justin is home...oh oh..what's next? can't wait for the next chapters

Author's Response: More coming soon!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 12:56PM Title: Tolerance

I detect the beginnings of a slight crush. I would suggest Trace and Justin bond over how bad they've both got it for the same girl but... *lol*

Author's Response: LOL! There could be a crush developing but you can't be sure until later. ;)


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 12:07PM Title: Tolerance

Oh dear, it's a shame Elli's parents like Trace, because she could have just gone 'Nah, Just kidding, this is the real Justin'' *tada* and they'd be more accepting. Ah, I don't know what I'm blabbing on about, but I do know that was a good chapter, nice work! Can't wait to see Justin's reaction, he still seems to think they're dating...

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sure that would have worked. LOL! Thanks so much for the review!





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