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Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 12:28PM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
Her day just really keeps on getting better
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 06:53AM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
Justin is an arsehole. That is all. And poor Elli being thrust into 'family' life all over again with a guy she doesn't really like. Great update!
Author's Response: Justin is an arsehole. That is all.--LOL! Straight and to the point aren't ya? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 03:38AM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
Typical bloody man. Does he really think "I was hungover" is really a valid excuse for treating a so-called friend like shit and accusing them of being nothing but a cheap slut? I know h'e famous and all but is he really stupid enough to think him giving her a little smirk and a flash of pearly whites makes up for him completely letting her down and being a bastard to top it all off?? As for her mother... the hyperness of the "let's be a family now" thing is ridiculous. You can;t just force a boyfriend on a teenage daughter and expect immediate bonding - especially by mandatory co-ercion. I'm glad Elli has Trace because everybody else is just sucking right now. And man I've rambled enough so I'm gonna quit now *lol*
Author's Response: Don't worry about rambling on--I quite enjoyed reading that. LOL! You sounded very frustrated with this past chapter (as did most of my readers) but I hopefully you won't be so frustrated after reading the next update. Thanks so very much for reviewing!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 06/14/05 - 11:36PM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
URGH. Justin is an arse. Update soon!
Author's Response: I second that!
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 06/14/05 - 11:33PM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
Ok, I'm calmer this time lol Ew, THAT was his apology and she's supposed just fall in his arms now? So he denies having feelings for her and still doesn't apologize for sleeping with that uh..what'd trace call her..that barbie? lol He was so busy sucking her face he doesn't even kow whats going on now lol She should stay mad for atleast another chapter. And um..Justin should feel worse..a lot worse :D lol Update soon!
Author's Response: Justin apology was kind of pathetic wasn't it? But what can you say; he is a guy. LOL! Don't worry about Elli forgiving him too soon. She may not be able to speak her mind to tell Justin off, but she knows how hold a grude. :) Thanks for the great review.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/14/05 - 10:34PM
Title: From Worse to Worse...er?
My girl needs a lil backbone. I like the story a lot and hope that you update very soon. Thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I so glad to hear you're lovin' this story so much.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/05 - 01:49PM
Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME
Damn Justin's being a little bitch. What the fuck is his problem? He's pissing me off. Sorry with the bad language but damn he needs to grow up and stop running his mouth before not knowing the truth and he's a hyprocrite. Ugh.
Author's Response: Don't worry about the bad language. Everyone seemed to be using quite a bit of bad language in their reviews after reading this chapter. Hmm...strange. LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/05 - 08:26PM
Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME
i don't know what's goin on with justin but he needs to get over himself. she shouldn't have run out just like that.
she needs to channel her inner bitch and "knock" some sense into justin b/c that whole runnin away/cryin doesn't work for me. i hope his feels real shitty when he finds out what happened.
Author's Response: "she needs to channel her inner bitch"--LOL! You are too funny, but I totally agree. Elli is just too shy to do somthing like that. I don't think Elli even has a "inner bitch." Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/05 - 07:43AM
Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME
Justin, you are being a dick! For god sake, does it SOUND like Elli is the kind of girl to just go and sleep with someone? NO! OF COURSE NOT! God, if he wasn't such a...well, a man...then MAYBE he would've just thought before he opened his big ass mouth! And I can't believe he slept with that slut Allison...it's gonna take a whole lotta groveling to get out this one, Timberlake! Update soon, I love it!
Author's Response: I think you just about summed up how everyone has felt after reading this chapter--pissed. LOL! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. It's much appreciated. :)
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 06/11/05 - 03:54PM
Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME
I understand that Justin's hungover and bitter from thinking that Trace and Elli have been sexing it up. But damn...that last line he says...had my eyes bugged out. That was definitely an Oh, hell naw! moment. She should have set him straight right then and there and had him the one feeling stupid and embarrassed. But that's not her style... either way he's gotta feel bad, even though she didn't go off on him like I would have liked to see. Her crying should have a worse effect on him. Stupid boy.
Author's Response: "Stupid boy"--Well I think that about sums it up. Boys can be so stupid sometimes can't they? And yes Justin's comment was quite harsh and I'm not surpried it had your eyes bugging out. It was mean. Thanks so much for the great review and I look forward to seeing what you think of the next chapter. :)
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