Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Fionnuala Signed Date: 06/06/05 - 02:21PM Title: Prologue

You know, I think the poor girl has already been through enough without having to sit through Model Behavior. Sheesh, Trace. Have some pity! Update soon!

Author's Response: LOL! I guess watching that movie could be viewed as more of a punishement huh? Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 06/06/05 - 07:07AM Title: From Bad to Worse

Oh god Model Behavior...I can't believe I actually invested in buying that. He was a model called Jason or something that sounded really like Justin, right? You would've thought cause it was so similar to life he would've done a better job, but hey presto he managed the worst acting since Sabrina the Teenage Witch. Oh I used to love that show...anyway, ahem lol, Steve sounds really irritating; "Who's this Justin character?" I just want to stick him in the corner with a ball of socks in his mouth so he can't speak, so I'm hoping he'll go away...anyway, sorry this review is so random lol My main point is that I loved it!

Author's Response: "Oh god"--You're starting to sound like me! LOL! That movie was pretty bad wasn't it? But no worries, I'm sure you were not the only one who invested in that movie. Only true Justin fans would buy that. Glad you loved the chapter and as always thanks so much for reviewing. I look forward to hearing what you think of the next update. :)


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 08:23PM Title: From Bad to Worse

Trace was evil LOL even though I never watched Model behavior I can imagine LOl

Author's Response: You're better off having never seen Model Behavior; LOL--J/K. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 05:52PM Title: From Bad to Worse

I am so lovin' this story, so please keep the updates comin'. Thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: More to come ASAP and glad you like!


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 01:33PM Title: From Bad to Worse

LOVIN' THE STORY!...model behavior, LMAO. =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: god gave me style Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 10:20AM Title: From Bad to Worse

That Steve guy is an asshole. I woulda been like dude, you ain't my dad so back the fuck up, damn. The ending was hilarious, have you ever seen Model Behavior, LOL. Not the best career move for Justin...

Author's Response: I was actually having touble ending this chapter so I took a break to watch some TV and Model Behavior happened to be on the Disney Channel. I flipped it on for a few minutes and and the end just sort of came to me. Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 10:02AM Title: From Bad to Worse

ROFL! PERFECT! Lol, nice thinking Trace. I'm glad Elli's come out with her feelings to Trace, maybe Justin'll come round next. Allison is very very sucky, why was she invited anyway? Justin is reeeally gonna regret that in the morning. Great update!

Author's Response: There was no way Elli could keep her feelings for Justin in much longer--it was eating her alive. Now we just need Justin to do the same right? Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/05/05 - 09:25AM Title: From Bad to Worse

MWAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Now that is some revenge - making her watch Model Behaviour!!! As for Justin he who is thinking with entirely the wrong part of his body, I'm just waiting for him to get all high and mighty with Trace despite the fact he was all over Slut Features... oh, I mean Allison. Whoops.

Author's Response: That movie was pretty bad wasn't it? LOL! Thanks for reviewing Hollie. :)


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 06/04/05 - 06:44AM Title: Meeting Steve

I hate people like Steve. That is all :/ I bet Steve is gonna say something really horrible about Justin and she won't be allowed to have lessons. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully Steve will behave himself and not get to fatherly when he meets Justin.


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/03/05 - 05:46PM Title: Meeting Steve

So Mom doesn't want Elli going over to Justin's house because she doesn't know him, but she's happy to put her daughter in a car with a man said daughter has only just met and obviously is not warming to? Gotta love that parental logic. And also loving the logic with banning her from the lessons in the first place. Having said that, given what would happen if *I* went for guitar lessons with Justin Timberlake and how much my mum would not appreciate bailing me out of jail for molestation, maybe it's understandable

Author's Response: "...if *I* went for guitar lessons with Justin Timberlake and how much my mum would not appreciate bailing me out of jail for molestation..."--LOL! Anywho, I appreciate the review--love long ones. I completely agree with you about Elli's mom and her lack of logic. Seems to me she needs to do some reevaluating. Thanks for reviewing!





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