Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/05 - 05:26AM
Title: The Phases
ROFL CHRISTINA! Nice summary of what could happen lol. I hope this doesn't backfire and it end up in her liking him too much or them liking each other, but Justin and Elli getting it on and living happily ever after. Great update!
Author's Response: I hope Trace's plan doesn't backfire either but that's not it my control...oh wait...it is...mwah! You must realize I cannot just have Elli and Justin fall in love and live happily ever after. If I did that you would get bored with all the lovey-dovey crap and the story would basically end. You don't want that do you? Anywho, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 05/22/05 - 03:18AM
Title: The Phases
Oooh....Trace is a little devil, isn't he? This could either a) work like a charm and Justin will be so overrun by jealousy that he admits he wants to marry Elli and have a thousand children in a week or b) it backfires terribly and Justin kills Trace, who has fallen in love with Elli, who is in love with both of them and kills herself because she can't choose, and then Justin feels terrible so then HE kills himself, and they're all dead! It's quite the Shakespearen tragedy! lol I'm rooting for option a), but then again because I'm a terrible person who relishes in other's misery, I would LOVE to see Justin get even more wound up about Trace's devious little 'plan'!
Author's Response: Interesting alternatives for what will happen. LOL! You really do love your drama don't you? :) I would tend to lean more towards option (a) as well but as you said I would also LOVE to see Justin get even more wound up about Trace's devious plan. You'll just have wait and see how it all plays out. Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing! More to come soon!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/05 - 03:01AM
Title: The Phases
Trace is an evil little sneak indeed, but I foresee this plan backfiring in some horrible way...
Author's Response: Backfiring huh? I haven't quite figured that part out yet but I can understand your worry. His plan backfiring is very possible....if he's not careful that is. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/05 - 09:43PM
Title: The Phases
Trace is an evil little sneak!
Author's Response: That he is....that he is. Gotta love it! LOL! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 05/21/05 - 09:18PM
Title: The Phases
I don't know why but I thought that it was Justin that she was gonna have her non-date date with. Hmmm, maybe I read it wrong or something. But her going out with Trace is still good though, cause his plan to piss Justin off is definitely working. But if he's not careful it might work a lil' too well and the next thing he'll know...his face will be having a little meeting with Justin's fist. lol "Good boy. And how old am I?"....haha that line was hilarious.
Author's Response: To be honest I tried to make everyone think it was Justin she was going to go on the non-date date with knowing very well it was going to be Trace all along. So don't worry, you didn't read anything wrong. That was just me being evil. ;) Anywho, thanks so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and it made you laugh. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/05 - 08:55PM
Title: The Phases
Nice. Really nice. Gotta love Trace. Hope that you update real soon, so thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks you! I'll update as soon as I can. I'm working on it right now...
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/05 - 07:16PM
Title: The Phases
Trace is soo mean LOL
that was funny
update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Lice!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/05 - 07:08PM
Title: The Phases
Oh my gosh! That was hilarious! Justin is so jealous. I like how Trace slid in that he kissed her at the end there, that was good. I hope she doesn't fall for Trace though.. Anyway, that was great :). Freakin' hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! You know Trace just had to add that he kissed Elli. His plan would not have worked to the extent it did without that little tid bit of information. Glad you found this chapter so "freakin' hilarious." Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 05/18/05 - 08:43PM
Title: And That's the Truth
Can't wait to see what will go down at thsi 'date' Heee
Author's Response: I bet you can't. ;) LOL!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 05:21PM
Title: And That's the Truth
It's a date, i can tell. It was so cute how Justin was jealous of Trace when he told him that he and Elli had "hit it off". Justin just needs to kiss her and get it over with :). Great update!
Author's Response: "Justin just needs to kiss her and get it over with."--I know right? What is he waiting for? LOL! You think Justin is jealous of Trace now, just wait. ;) Thanks for reviewing.
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