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Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 10:48AM
Title: And That's the Truth
So, is tonight the night that Justin kisses Elli? Or, is it the night Elli catches her mom in her lie...read: in her bed shaking up with some dude? Either way, I'd enjoy reading it. *lol*
Author's Response: LOL! You'll have to wait and see what happens now won't you. I'll definetley take you're suggestions into considerations. Thanks!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 09:17AM
Title: And That's the Truth
They are cute, but her mom is psycho just freaking tell the truth already. You already know how I feel about Liz and her mom. Justin is hilarous about being jealous and nervous about all of this. Cute! great job
Author's Response: How did I know you would have somthing to say about her mom being a psycho? LOL! Glad you like and thanks for the review. Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 07:14AM
Title: And That's the Truth
Lol, I agree with Hollie, they should be on a date even if they aren't. Bless Justin, he's cute when he's jealous lol. Good update!
Author's Response: LOL! I agree with both you and Hollie but we can't all get what we want now can we? ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 04:46AM
Title: And That's the Truth
It's a date. Or if it's not, it should be. *lol*
Author's Response: Thanks Hollie! LOL!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 05/16/05 - 10:36PM
Title: And That's the Truth
I can't wait for their non-date date. It should be interesting. And I hope she does go and doesn't try to wiggle her way out of it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I hope the non-date turns out to be as interesting as you think.
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/05 - 06:35PM
Title: She’s a Nice Girl
UGH! First off ..I didn't mean for that review to be on the first chapter ..lolol Secondly, I didn't mean if "Trace went out with Justin just to rise out of him blah blah" ..that doesn't even make since ..lolol ...What I meant was ..if Trace went out with ELLI to get a rise out of Justin ..then blah blah ..I just needed to set that straight. Sorry, ya know I love ya!
Author's Response: Don't worry about it. I make errors like that all the time. Plus a review from you without an error would be just wrong. LOL! Just kidding. :)
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/05 - 06:32PM
Title: Prologue
Well ..i'm kind of pissed of now. lolol, If any dude that I liked called me a "nice girl" i'd be mad as hell. That's not something you say about a girl you like that's what you say about a distant cousin. What the heck, Justin!? What is he smoking crack? ...lolol, If Trace went out with Justin just to get a rise out of him ..I say do it! But at the same time ..it's a risk, because Trace could indeed fall in love with her. THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! I mean ..technically it can because you're the author. But in Devon world this just isn't happening. But he knows he likes her! Even if he's too sissyfied to admit it! Loved it, ya know I did. Also, I think it's so cute how they act when someone says the other person's name. It's a likeness that's adorable, but I know in my heart of hearts it could get emotional! And they could be really deep in love if Justin stops acting like a punk. The End.
Author's Response: FIrst off you know how I feel about long reviews--love them! So thanks for that. Secondly--hang on I have to re-read what you wrote.....Let's see, where to start. As I said in a previous review of this chapter: remind me to never get on your bad side. LOL! And I see you are starting to think like me....or maybe I'm starting to think like you...anywho, no one else seemed to catch on to the fact that Trace's plan my just not work in Justin's benefit or just not work at all. I'm not saying if it will or not--to be honest I haven't really decided yet. :) So glad to hear/read how much you are enjoying this story and the interation of Elli and Justin or at least the way they act when the other person is mentioned. The End!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/05 - 12:55PM
Title: She’s a Nice Girl
"Nice" chapter! :) They are so cute. Its funny how nervous they get when the others name is mentioned.
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle! Nice pun....LOL!
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/05 - 07:47AM
Title: She’s a Nice Girl
i'd be fuckin' pissed if some guy called me a damn "nice girl". i'd punch him and make him take it back b/c that lil sister/just my friend gets really old.
Author's Response: Dang girl! Remind me to never get on your bad side. LOL! But really I totally feel you on this. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 05/09/05 - 05:57PM
Title: She’s a Nice Girl
Justin you fool, she has got you sooooo whipped! Update soon!
Author's Response: If he's whipped now imagine how bad it would be if they were actually together. LOL! Thanks for the review!
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