Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 05/04/05 - 06:46PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Justin feening over a 17 year and Elli she is so cute with all babbling and stuff. Trace he can work a nerve though.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you're liking!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 05:36PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
cool..they are going to have lunch together..hehehe Hope Trace is not coming LOL
Author's Response: Thanks Lice!~
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 01:29PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Justin should really not try to be smart, it's not very becoming, whatever he thinks lol. And hey, if shes only a couple of months underage, there's nothing wrong with that in my book. As for her mother... I don't know what to say to that, maybe she's trying to be rebelious? Maybe she felt restricted in the rules she made? I hope she tries to be more understanding of Elli, and I hope she doesn't shove her new man down her throat. Oh yeah, and parents having sex is ALWAYS disgusting, no matter the situation lol. Good update!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for the review Helena. I can always count on you to write somthing nice and ususally humorous.
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 01:11PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Where to start ..oh yes, the whole shower scene. OF COURSE, being the pervert that I so naturally am ..I would have to talk about this first. He didn't do anything it was hot. I couldn't physically see it and it was STILL hot. Gosh ..and another thing ..lmaoo ..wth was "Is her house on fire" Yes ..because the first thing she would do if her house caught on fire would be to call the holier than thou, Justin Timberlake. Aww ..they're so sweet. Elli needs to understand that her mother is an ADULT and will make ADULT decisions ..and Elli needs to take it in an ADULT manner. I know she misses her father though. But yeah. the whole three adult thing? I think a certain Timberlake is trying to convince himself more than her. Yeah, she's 17 but every day she's closer to 18. If he thinks it that way ..he won't have a problem. Always think with the cup half full instead of half empty. You are sooo making me happy with all of the frequent updates!
Author's Response: Let me start off in much the same way that you did in mentioning the shower scene first--glad you liked it and if I ever put another scene like that in the story I'll be sure to tone it down for ya...or not. :)
Don't you know that if your house was on fire Justin Timberlake would be the first person you would call? I know I would....not. LOL!
You are 100 % correct with the whole Elli and her mother being an adult situation and about Justin trying to convince himself about Elli's adult-ness (that's not a word is it) more so that he is Elli. I don't know if I'm even making any sence so I'll just end her by saying thank you ever so much for reviewing and I look forward to seeing what you think of the coming chapters.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 04/29/05 - 04:48AM
Title: Smudges
She should have enjoyed the closeness more LOL
I'll help kicking Trace
Author's Response: I know right?---"I'll help kicking Trace."--you and everyone else. lol. Thanks for reveiwing.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 09:49PM
Title: Smudges
Damn it! Wanted him to kiss her sooooo badly!! You have to update soon!
Author's Response: That's what everyone is saying. I'll try to update ASAP. Thanks!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 02:57PM
Title: Smudges
*kicks Trace*
Damn the man, just when we were gonna see some action...
Author's Response: You know I can't give the readers what they want right away. If I did there would be no suspense. Lol. Don't worry you'll see some 'action' eventually--I can't say when though. ;)
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 01:50PM
Title: Smudges
Elli is so cute when she's around Justin. Damn Trace, he always has to walk in at the wrong damn time.
Author's Response: Damn Trace! LOL! He just had to walk in at that exact moment didn't he? :) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:59PM
Title: Smudges
Trace's always blocking Justin in almost every story that I read. *lol*
Author's Response: LOL! He is isn't he?
Reviewer: Laurencoz
Signed
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:45PM
Title: Smudges
That was so cute how he defended her! He is being so sweet and it's cute how she's all shy - it's great - keep it coming;)
Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much!
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