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Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:39PM
Title: Smudges
OMg Ijust read the entire story in like an hour. It was so good. You so have to update now. It is so cute. I LOVE it. But what does Elli look like? I don't know if she's been described yet. BUt I love it. They are so cute. Honestly and I love how she jumped off the counter and hid behind him. Too cute!
Author's Response: How wonderful to see a new reader! Glad you're lovin it and I always appreciate reviews. I hadn't realized that I never described what Elli looks like so I'll make sure to add that into the next chapter (I guess I just had her pictured in my head and was thinking you all saw the same thing--I know you're not mind readers ;)
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:35PM
Title: Smudges
Wow. W..o..w.. Um ..I can't breathe? And that can't be good. But ..she did realoly well given that Justin was RIGHT inbetween her legs. What's up with these two. Move a little to left ..alittle to the right DIVEEEE and you're on top of each other. Gosh, not rocket science people. lolol ..He was sooo sexy in this chapter. And not doin' a damn thing either. Hell, that's like real life right there ..lolol. They almost KISSED I could taste it ..then fathead Trace had to come in and ruin EVERYTHING! But ..the mood was set. He was soo sweet and gentle ..GOSH ..the anticipation is rising ..I can't type anymore ..i'm too hot for all of this. Great as usual!
Author's Response: Wow to you too. LOL! Your reviews are always so long--I LOVE that! You give me the inspiration to update faster and try to make each chapter better than the last. Glad you enjoyed this chapter even if it was a bit frustrating for you. But just think, if it was frustrating for you that Elli and Justin didn't kiss imagine how they must feel. Thanks for reviewing!
P.S. Go take a cold shower to cool yourself off....lol!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 11:44AM
Title: Smudges
Oh my goodness...as Justin was saying all that stuff about tattoos I was thinking "They don't hurt that much, do they? I could totally get one on my thigh"...lol and I imagine Elli was thinking the same! Aw, I love Justin in this story. He's so sweet and gentle and...sigh-worthy, if that makes any sense at all!! Great update, oh-my-gosh-girl LOL ;)
Author's Response: LOL! You are too funny Teeny. I always love reading your reviews. You are always so sweet and funny and as you know I really respect your opinion because you are such an amazing author. So thanks so much for taking the time to review and I'm glad you're liking this story. ---"oh-my-gosh-girl"--laughed right out loud when I read that!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 11:22AM
Title: Smudges
Hmm I keep picturing him this his shirt off and what it would do to me if he kept rubbing up against me like that. And standing like that between my legs and hugging and being gentle. Awww, its just so adorable how they are together! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle! I would faint if I were ever in the situaion Elli was in with Justin. Too much skin and closeness for me....although I would enjoy it. ;)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 11:20AM
Title: Smudges
He can bite me -hard or soft, I don't care. He could lick me too if he wanted... I'm trailing off a little aren't I? Lol, it was a nice train of thought. Justin having make up remover seems to be pretty good blackmail material. At least thats what I'd use it for... mwah ha ha. I'm terribly dirrty today, don't mind me lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response: "He can bite me -hard or soft, I don't care."--LOL! Girl you are too funny. I laughed right out loud when I read that. I've already thought about the eye makeup remover blackmail material too...mwah! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 04/26/05 - 09:50AM
Title: E-L-L-I
Wait, 1...2...3......4. *gasp* It is!!!!!!
Author's Response: Her name is four letters! lol!
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/05 - 06:30PM
Title: E-L-L-I
I ..like tattoo's when they're on Justin ..lolol. I can't believe you stopped right there! Ugh, i'm like okay ..Elli has Justin in a room all by themselves with very little clothing ..it would only take alittle motivation from the both of them to ..anyways ..I think it was totally rude for Justin not to stand up for her. But ..he likes her. I know it! Aww, he called her Sweetheart. Gosh, could I love them anymore. No comment on Liz ..just no.
Author's Response: I like tatoos when they're on Jusitn too, lol! Now you don't know for sure Justin didn't stand up for Elli; you only got Elli's POV in this chapter. You are just too sweet with the compliments you give me. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/05 - 04:29PM
Title: E-L-L-I
NO! You can't stop!!! Update soon! I am dying over here!!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm working on it!
Reviewer: lice
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/05 - 12:50PM
Title: E-L-L-I
I love tattoos. Lol But not that people that get covered in them LOL
But yes, Justin's tattoo in teh back is sexy. and this chapter was great. But I, as a fat representer would never wear something I don't feel confortable in just because everyone else will be using it LOL
Author's Response: I agree with you about the tattoos and thanks so much for the compliment. Your review is much appreciated.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/05 - 12:02PM
Title: E-L-L-I
I don't normally like a man with tattoos either but I think for Justin Timberlake I will make an exception lol. Especially when hes shirtless. I think he should be shirtless more often... but back to the story lol. I can imagine how she feels easily, I couldn't imagine what my self confidence would do around a load of beautiful people. Probably a kamakazi nose dive. Great update
Author's Response: I don't normally like tattoos either but like you said it seems to work for Justin. LOL! I also agree that he should be shirtless more often but that's getting off topic isn't it. :) Thanks so much for reviewing!
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