Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 07:47PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

Shit man that was an awesome chapter. One of the best yet. I can't believe it. Everyone is gonna know and I think she wants to have sex but I don't think Justin will. Why couldn't she just be 18. But everyone is doing in now a days. Lindsey and Wilmer, Hilary Duff adn Jole Madden, its can't be that big a problem.

Author's Response: Awe, thank you. You are just too nice. It may not be a big deal with celebrities but Elli's personal life would take big blow. She would no longer be just an "average" citizen plus all the drama with her mother. Hopefully that made sense to you. :) Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 07:16PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

They should move here to Brazil, so she'd be legal here. LOL Love thi story and I missed it. :D

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 03:48PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

I second what Hollie said. Although, if they were in Chicago, Elli wouldn't be considered a minor. *lol* Wait, what am I saying?!?!?! I do not...I repeat, DO NOT...condone Justin and Elli having "relations". I may be alone on this one, but somebody has to be the voice of reason (or is it insanity?). I say no sex in the champagne room, and the champagne room is Elli's body...therefore they can't have sex. Can't they wait a few more months? *gets on knees and grovels* PLEASE?!?!?! I'm only thinking about Elli, I am in no way trying to harm or tease or torture Justin...I'd save that for real life. *lol*

Author's Response: "Although, if they were in Chicago, Elli wouldn't be considered a minor. *lol* Wait, what am I saying?!?!?! I do not...I repeat, DO NOT...condone Justin and Elli having "relations". "--LOL You're too funny. :) I know that you don't want anything physical to happen between Justin and Elli. You have made that quite clear. You'll just have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nikki g. Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 02:44PM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

I feel the exact same way and when you said that the shnit hit the fan, oh did it. love it so please update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time review. Thanks and I hope to hear from you regarding the next chapter.


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 10/10/05 - 02:55AM Title: When the Shit Hits the Fan….Duck

WHY do I feel like sex with a minor is getting increasingly likely?? Deary me, what a tangled web we weave. More soon, my dear!

Author's Response: LOL! More is coming. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Barb Anonymous Date: 09/22/05 - 08:30PM Title: The Drama That Follows

OOOhh...I just started reading like, 2 days ago and I am hooked! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yay! Another new reader. That makes me feel so awesome that you're "hooked." Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 09/22/05 - 08:30AM Title: The Drama That Follows

That's not gonna be good! can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks!


Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Date: 09/22/05 - 07:25AM Title: The Drama That Follows

She finally kissed him! Such a cute chapter! I feel bad for Justin that Elli is confusing him so much but I think they're finally coming along! Update soon! You can't leave a cliffhanger and then not update soon!!!!! Awesome Job !

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and for saying such nice things about my chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 09/21/05 - 02:08PM Title: The Drama That Follows

Well. Christina just wandered into my brain and stole all my thoughts and then reviewed before I had a chance to using my thoughts. That bitch *lol*

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reviewing. I'll go reread her reivew and pretend that you said it first. ;)


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 09/21/05 - 04:09AM Title: The Drama That Follows

Where the HELL have I been? Let's just blame temporary insanity and a whole lot of business, okay? Anyway, now that I'm back, Elli don't make me bitch slap you! She CANNOT let things from the oustide have any effect on her and Justin because that would just completely screw over everything that they have worked so freaking hard to achieve! And for goodness sake, judging by their heavy makeout sessions and the presence of "it", things are starting to get very serious and, for us perverted readers, very interesting! LOL I'm just hoping Cop Butler keeps his mouth closed and doesn't tell Steve or her mom, because if he does and it has a negative effect on Elli and Justin...then I'd just have to kick your ass :) The story's awesome, keep on going!

Author's Response: I don't know, where have you been?! I've missed you're reviews. You better get back on track here with your reviews or I'll have to "bitch slap you."--Just kidding. I know I really shouldn't talk about reviewing because I almost always miss your updates and don't review. Just as you said, I blame it on temporary insanity. :) I'll have to pop over and check out what Cat and Justin have been up to. Anyway, back to the review you left. Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm so sorry that Elli frustrating you. Maybe things will get better in the coming chapters.....maybe. ;) Thanks again for reviewing and you better come back and read the next chapters too....or else!





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