Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 03/22/05 - 09:33PM
Title: The Sit-in
You know if they had of been really crazy fans him storming in there wasn't exactly going to help the situation. And even if they weren't fans what was he going to do if it had of been someone else say 'look it's me Justin Timberlake...leave now?' And I don't know why but I thought the guy that was going to catch her would be Justin. lol. Oh well. I can't remember but I'm sure he's caught her before and if he hasn't she'll probably give him plenty more chances to do so. I don't know why people don't seem to like the mom or...what's her face, Elli's friend...they seem okay to me. The friend is just outspoken, forthright...a little crazy but I don't see that as a bad thing. I got some friends that kinda act like her...lol maybe that's why she doesn't seem weird to me. And I'm sure it must be weird for Elli to think about her mother dating again, but she has to realize that just because she's dating someone doesn't mean that she's cheating on her dad. I mean, he passed away. And the last time I checked you can't cheat on the dead. Besides if she hadn't been out doing God knows what with God knows who...Elli would have been in big trouble. So this could turn out to be very good for Elli.
Author's Response: Wow, another really long review....LOVE IT! I was hoping you would think the person who caught Elli would be Justin so that's awesome that that's what you thought. :) I know what you mean about Liz and Elli's mom...I don't think they're that bad but like I told Danyelle, I see them in the grander scheme of things and how their current character development with influence the rest of the story. Anywho, thanks again for an awesome review!
Reviewer: samantha
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 06:02PM
Title: The Sit-in
update asap please lol :-)
Author's Response: Working on it!
Reviewer: xkcfanx
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Date: 03/22/05 - 05:10PM
Title: The Sit-in
this story is so cute....it reminds me of my fiancee and i lmao....i get in trouble if i even touch the door handle lmao...great job girlie keep up the good work =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You fiancee must be a sweetheart....when's the big day?
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 03:30PM
Title: The Sit-in
I want to know more of what's going on with her Mom?
Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough....
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 03:27PM
Title: The Sit-in
First and foremost, who does Timberlake thinks he is? OMG, God forbid he have to eat with normal people. I dunno why he thinks everytime he has to be around other people they're automatically psychotic fans who want to kidnap him. Gosh ..okay sorry, that kind of pissed me off. lolol, Elli is just like me. I fall over my own feet. I fall over stuff that isn't even there. It's sad. I'm sorry ..but I don't like Liz. She's too overdramatic. Of course, they were just pushing them out like they WEREN'T paying customers! So ..she had every right to know why they were being thrown out. But there's something about her that I just don't like. But i'm in love with Elli. In a totally ..not lesbian type of way, lolol. Great as usual.
Author's Response: I know! Where does he get off? LOL! That probably wasn't the smartest, most considerate move Justin could have made. "But i'm in love with Elli. In a totally ..not lesbian type of way.." LOL! I laughed so hard when I read that. You are too much! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such an awesome review.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 03:24PM
Title: The Sit-in
And the Psycho strikes again but this time she is of galivanting around with a man! Tisk tisk trying to give her daughter morals and she is out slutting herself around or something like that. 10 points for her. Sounds like she needs to loosen up and let her daughter grow up. Now I can't forget to mention freak Liz and she did "freak" out with the whole ice cream thing. But as I think about it I probably would have done the same thing. Celebrities shouldn't always get there way like that its not fair to everyone else. Maybe I want a resturant or ice cream store to myself its not like there going to do that unless I pay a huge amount of money or break in. Dumb people in the world today. haha I loved the part where the falls and Traces catches her and Justin automatically thinks of her.Damn she really is clumsy. I love it! haha great chapter.
Author's Response: Wow; you wrote a lot. Thanks! I'm glad you liked this chapter so much, it was a lot of fun to write and probably one of my favorites so far. I just knew you were going to mention the "freak" and "psycho." I just don't see it like that but I can also see the bigger picture and what will happen in the future. Thanks again Danyelle. I love it when you write a lot!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 11:30AM
Title: Lick Me
aww damn sh eis clueless about him liking her lol
'kiss the girl' hahaha
great story
Update soon please :D
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 03/21/05 - 11:17AM
Title: Lick Me
When he asked her that all she had to do was turn her head, presenting the cheek and smile a lil...he would have got it. But then, that's not her style. And plus the people working there were probably watching their every move, which would make it awkward too. What I'm about to say isn't my style at all, but it's true so here is it...this story just keeps getting cuter all the time. *sighs* There I said it...I swear I'm getting girlier all the time, but I refuse to become a girly girl. lol
Author's Response: LOL! Don't worry I don't think you're all girly girly now. I appreciate you telling that you think my story is cute. You are too funny! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/21/05 - 09:42AM
Title: Lick Me
Man she blew the whole lick thing. She should have smeared the ice cream all over her face and be like lick it all off. Its adorable that they have crushes on each other. And now they have to have another date. But I'm curious on what the freak & psycho are going to do. Poor Eli and her messed up friends and family.
Author's Response: LOL! You are too much sometimes Danyelle. I would have like to see what you would have done in that situation. Anwho, I don't think you have ever not mentioned the 'freak and psycho' in one of your reviews. LOL! I love you're reviews; they crack me up!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/21/05 - 08:22AM
Title: Lick Me
AAAWWWW!!!!!! They both have a crush on each other! Too cute!
Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing! Glad you like!
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