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Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 03/20/05 - 11:00PM Title: Prologue

Soul* licked* ..goshh it's too late for me to try to be thinking about typo's. Lord knows I have enough of them in my stories. lolol ..But just so you didnt think I was a goober ..I thought i'd fix 'em for you.

Author's Response: LOL! I knew what you meant! :) Thanks for fixin' it though!


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 03/20/05 - 10:59PM Title: Lick Me

Awww ..Elli has a crush! Cuuutee. I totally gets where she's coming from. I know thousands of girls who would sell their sole to be in the situation she was. But I bet all thousand of them would move if not quicker than she did for that napkin. Because not everyday do you get a "What would you do if I liked that icecream off your cheek?" from Mr. Timberlake. Her brain wasn't functioning ..or maybe it was. But she made a smart move. No good can come from licking, lolol. NO GOOD. But they're so cute. Even Justin ..he soo has a crush that he's trying so hard not to have. I don't think I can like this story more than I do now!

Author's Response: I just love reading your reviews! You always write nice long ones that give specific examples of things you liked or didn't or related too. I appreciate that because I know it takes time to do. Reviews like yours help me to update sooner. So thank you! Now to address what you wrote: I would have freaked out if the ice cream situation had happened to me too. Who wouldn't have?! Thanks so much for the awesome compliments! I look forward to readling more reveiws from you in the future.


Reviewer: lilD Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 10:50PM Title: The Exchange

Cute! She's such a klutz! (Not that i'm much better myself..lol) Update soon

Author's Response: LOL! We all have a little bit of a klutz in us. I'm sure Justin brings that quality out in girls. ;) Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 06:45PM Title: The Exchange

Man she's a dufus. But ya know that sounds exactly like something I would do. I love it. But man she lost the oreo's. I happen to be a big fan of them I probably would have dove in after them, they are in a plastic wrapper they would have been just fine. I love the whole note thing reminds me of when I was younger and me and my bestfriend would hold her brothers stuffed animals ransom. Good times. And whether just thinks it or not thats sooo a date. And what a great one at that. Who wouldn't love lunch on a sail boat? Hmm probably people who get sea sick, especially mixing food in with it for them. But anyways thats besides the point. Haha great chapter. I love your stories i'm a HUGE fan. :) Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I always get a big smile on my face after reading your reviews. You always make me feel so good about myself with the great compliments you give. Thank you so much. Very cute about your love for Oreos and how you and your friends used to hold your brother's stuffed animals ransom. Thank you so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 04:31PM Title: The Exchange

Very Cute : )

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! :)


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 03/17/05 - 03:59PM Title: The Exchange

For the sake of not saying something that's already been said 3 (maybe 4 depending on if someone sends a review in real quick) times before me...I won't even mention how ridiculously aww inducing and cute that ransom was. And I won't say anything about how Elli should watch the time, before she finds herself with another embarrassing lecture from her dear mummy to listen to. Nope I won't say anything about that at all. Because all of that has already been said before, and I'm much too original for that. lol Riiight...but I will say this... TBC... Ha, now you know how it feels. lol Whose got problems? I got problems. And I'm gonna shut up ahora.

Author's Response: LOL! I laughed right out loud when I read your review. It was definatly original! :) TBC...You're a riot! I'm so glad you liked the update. I was afraid people would think the ransom note was too cheesy or something but everyone who has reviewed so far has liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to write a great review. I really, really appreciate it!


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 03:04PM Title: The Exchange

That ransom note was too cute. And completely funny, because in a way it seems like something Justin would do. Haha, I actually laughed AND snorted. Okay, well I snort on occasion. But hardly ever does a story make me do that. He's soo cute! I hate to fall in love with a character especially when he's mostly made up out of the mind of another chick, lolol. No offense. I liked that he blushed ..then tried to change the subject. They would be really cute together. Whether she's underage or not. I can't wait to see how their relationship turns out.

Author's Response: First of all I must tell you that I love reading long reviews that tell me specifically what you liked or didn't. Second I am honored that my story emitted a snort from you. LOL! And thank you so much for saying that I portrayed a believable Justin; that means I'm doing my "job" right. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 02:04PM Title: The Exchange

The ransom was cute. She is so cute and klutzy though you got laugh that.

Author's Response: Thanks Gigi! Elli is an all class klutz....just like me. ;)


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 03/17/05 - 01:24PM Title: The Exchange

LOL! at the ransom note, dorky but cute. And uh oh... she could get in trouble being out so long if she's not careful...

Author's Response: You would think Elli would have learned her lession last time and just stayed at home. The things we do for Justin Timberlake. ;) Thanks for reivewing.


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 03/15/05 - 10:15PM Title: Grounded

Okay, I have yet to realize how I missed this chapter. I've been looking for it, and just never noticed it was updated. Friggin me. But it was really cute. But we've all had that "i'm disappointed in you" speech. It sucks. But even if Justin won't admit it, he soo has a crush on her. How old is he in here, anyways? I love this story! Haha, oh ..and I would've done exactly what she did ..whenever I have to leave messages when I don't want to i'm like "uhh ..so yeah ..uh" haha that's so cute. But I would've felt like a complete dumbass doin that on Timberfrigginfineass's phone.

Author's Response: After I posted this update there were a bunch of other updates so it got pushed off the first page. That's probably why you missed it. Glad you did find it though and that you enjoyed it. Both Justin and Elli are in a bit of denial right now but they'll realize how they feel eventually; hopefully it won't be too late. Oh and Justin is 22 in this story; I guess I forgot to add that. Sorry :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it a lot!





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