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Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 03/14/05 - 07:26PM
Title: Grounded
Of course, I would have a typo. It just couldn't be from me if there wasn't one. lol Anyways, since I'm sending this...I might as well give some actual f/b. Alright, so...I'm glad Justin didn't turn out to be the jackass that he started out to be, and Elli's clumsiness is hilarious, aside from her getting red in the face, she handles it well. lol And Justin better watch out before he gets hooked by the jailbait...if it hasn't happened already.
Author's Response: LOL! Don't worry about the type-o; it happens to everyone once and a while. Glad you like the 'new' Justin better and Elli's clumsiness. I sort of based her off myself. I am extremely clumsy. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/05 - 07:25PM
Title: Grounded
"Oh, I’ll do more than that….." hmm....::rubs chin:: Wonder what that means, ay? ::wink, wink:: Is it gonna get a lil "durrty" up in here?!?!? Oh how I hope so!!! Lol. Lovin' the story and update soon!
Author's Response: Lol! You have such a dirty mind! Just kidding. Thanks for reviewing and I'll try to update asap.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 03/14/05 - 07:15PM
Title: Grounded
Oh, he'll do more than huh? lol Update soon, please. I said please...so that means you have too. :)
Author's Response: Oh I better get on that update because you said to, huh? lol! I'm working on it!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/05 - 03:56PM
Title: Grounded
Wow not only do you have a stalker freak in the story, you have a psycho mom. Damn really sucks to be Eli. She had a screwed up bunch attached to her, then she's falling for Justin. Things are about to get real fucked up. (excuse the language) But its true. Interesting story I love it! Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: LOL Danyelle! You crack me up! :) But you are right that things are going to get a bit complicated for Elli as the story progresses....but I have to keep your interest some how right? ;) Thanks so much for reviewing!
P.S. I updated Walking Tall a while ago. Please check it out and review if you have time. I would love to know what you think. :)
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/05 - 02:56PM
Title: Grounded
Not the speech!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I know what you mean. I hate that speech...it's worse than any punishment a parent could ever give. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/14/05 - 02:27PM
Title: Grounded
Oh I'm really liking this story. They so want each other.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes they do both have at least a physical attraction to one another. Thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: helena
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Date: 03/14/05 - 02:13PM
Title: Grounded
Oooooh, things are gonna get interesting, and they both have crushes -how adorable lol. And god do I know the I’m not angry, I’m just very disappointed in you speech, BOOOO! lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response: You're right helena, things are going to get much more intesting. Neither Justin nor Elii will admit what they are feeling for one another but when they do....mmmm....watch out. LOL! Can you tell I'm trying to build anticipation. :) Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/10/05 - 10:21AM
Title: Case of the Rambling Klutz
Uh oh!!!! I think Justin knows her secret...even though I don't think Elli knows that she likes him yet. I can't wait to hear what Justin thinks about her slip up...in words and off of the couch.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I'm working on a update right now so you will soon find out Justin's thoughts. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/05 - 05:47PM
Title: Case of the Rambling Klutz
I love the fact that you had Justin's POV terrific. You got quite a few giggles out of me. Especially with the whole cat fight but I still think Liz is a stalker/freak. She needs to go classes for it, or something. Great great job i'm stoked to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle. I'm glad I could make you giggle. :) You are too funny with all of this Liz--stalker stuff. LOL!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/05 - 03:58PM
Title: Case of the Rambling Klutz
SOOOO cute! Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks!
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