Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/05 - 04:58AM
Title: Shame On Me
Poor girl might be scarred for life.
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/05 - 01:22AM
Title: Shame On Me
loved it. absolutely lovin soooooo much. great. update soon and thanks. jnb!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love to hear that you love it. :)
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/05 - 11:14AM
Title: Bring on the Rain
I'm just updating now even tho I read this like a week ago but I just read it again soo anyway awesome job! I'm so excited he asked her to be his girlfriend. I can't wait to see what hapens noww that she is officially his girlfriend1 update soon please!
Author's Response: I just love that you read some of my chapters more than once...it makes me feel special :p Glad you liked it that much and thanks so much for reviewing...both times. :)
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/19/05 - 02:07PM
Title: Bring on the Rain
Finally he asked her! I can't wait to see them do more couple things together. Hopefully Elli will get some more confidence now that shes officially his girlfriend but I still think it's cute how shes so shy and innicent so don't take it all away! Update please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review! Glad you liked and I can't wait to find out what you think of the coming chapters.
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/16/05 - 11:29PM
Title: Bring on the Rain
SCORE! haha...yay! that's awesome!
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 07:40PM
Title: Bring on the Rain
Yes! Yes! YES! I'm so glad he finally asked her! Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 10:52AM
Title: Game Over
Thank goodness Elisha has a big mouth! Without her, Justin and Elli would still be stuck not touching each other...which is a good thing according to Trace. I don't want Justin corrupting her, he can touch her all he wants...within certain boundaries.
Author's Response: Funny, most reviewers can't stand Elisha's "big mouth." But you are correct. Elisha's big mouth is what got them together in the first place. Don't you worry about Justin--Elli wouldn't let him take advantage of her, but someone has to take her innocence and wouldn't you rather it be Justin? LOL! Thanks for revieiwng!
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 08/16/05 - 10:50AM
Title: Bring on the Rain
Absolutely fantabulous! Trace and Elisha need to focus on each other more often. Not only are they sweet, but maybe all of the hairbrained ideas would stop. And I'm so proud of Elli, asking for a kiss- and for once, she wasn't the one afraid of something silly like a thunderstorm. Speaking of rain, it's quite dreary outside, but the thought of a wet Justin asking for a girlfriend somehow makes it all better.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I really liked writing this one and, not to toot my own horn, but I especially like the part where Elli asks for a kiss. I just wanted to show that she is changing and growing and maturing and that there are more sides to her character that you have yet to even see. Enough of me babbling. Thanks a bunch for reviewing--much appreicated.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 08/16/05 - 10:28AM
Title: Bring on the Rain
Oh, snap, today's not wednesday...Ay dios mio, this crappy weather is bogging my mind down. Yeah, that's it...it's the weather's fault. I'm not stupid...lol
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 08/16/05 - 10:25AM
Title: Bring on the Rain
School...don't remind me. *sighs* By wednesday does that mean you started today or next wednesday? If you meant today, so so sorry for ya. lol Anyways, the rain kiss was cute. But I'm sure that next chapter is gonna be drama...her mom'll back in town...Cop what's his face will back and now they actually have a true blue relationship. Elli is getting more relaxed and open around him...Justin's talkin about being scared...yeah, I have a feeling the next chapter is probably gonna give him reason to be scared. Update soon!
Author's Response: I don't know about all that drama in the next chapter. You know I don't like drama.....riiiight. LOL! Maybe I'll hold off the drama until the chapter after the next. We'll see. ;) Oh, school started...uh I think it was actually the Tuesday after the Wednesday that you were talking about. Anyway, I left on a Wednesday--the seventeenth I think and now have two weeks under my belt and I'm starting to get back in to the swing of things. Hope school is giong well for you too. Thanks for revieiwng!
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