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Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 06:23AM
Title: Game Over
I want to kick both Justin and Elisha right now. I think it's sweet how Elisha's trying to compensate for her initial jealousy of Elli by looking out for her and befriending her, but she really needs to keep her nose out *nods*. as per usual, you rock, more soon please :o)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Hollie! I'm glad you're liking this story and that you think that I rock. YOU ROCK TOO! LOL! :)
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 01:35AM
Title: Game Over
And Nikki G is right! I just remembered the prologue! Noooo! I don't like sad stories! I might not be able to keep reading now :( I'm sad
Author's Response: Like I said to Nikki G, you never know what might happen.....things could turn out happy......maybe....
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 01:32AM
Title: Game Over
Eh, I understad why he did it, figured it would back fire but I understand where's he's coming from. Might've been a better idea if he talked to Elli about it first though. Elli's gotta come around sooner or later ya know? I mean..just little steps like just holding his hand or giving him a hug. And, to be honest, Ive never practicually liked Elisha, she reminds me of this nosey teacher I used to have. She's always in someone's buiness and she usually ends up making it worse. Blah lol Um..what else? Right, while Elli is upset, I think it's a good time for me to step in ;) Ok, more soon!
Author's Response: You know guys aren't good at talking things out. Look at what happened between Justin and Trace in the chapter before this one. Pssh...men...LOL! You don't like Elisha? I understand that I guess. Maybe you like her better in the coming chapters. :) I hope you stepped in for Elli and "comforted" Justin as best you could. LOL! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:51PM
Title: Game Over
Okay I understand why he did what he did even tho it was childish. That argument was hella funny, but the shy seems to be getting out of this shy stage, slowly. That is a good thing, so J better be ready to beg for forgiveness, be open and ask her to be his gf. Oh yeah, I just reread the story and from the opening, this won't be a happy ending. I'm sad about that, very sad. PLease update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Awe, don't be sad. We have a ways to go before the end and you never know what might happen. Maybe I just tossed that sad part into fool you into thinking it wouldn't be a happy ending.....or maybe not (mwahahaha!). I can't believe you took the time to reread the entire story. That's quite flattering that you would even want to do that so thank you. :) And don't worry, Justin knows what he has to do to make things right again. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:49PM
Title: Game Over
stupid justin....... arg...that's all i have to say...arg
Author's Response: Arg.....lol!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 11:24AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Bless Trace's heart! Great, now I sound like my Grandma. I'm glad Trace's there, they need a chaperone. I don't trust Justin. It'd be okay if Elli wasn't so, how you say, "inexperienced".
Author's Response: LOL! You do not sound like your Grandma. Well I guess you might--I've never met your grandma. Anyway, I think that you are the only one who does not want Justin to corrupt Elli. Most everyone else wants to see them 'get it on.' LOL! Thanks for reviewing and looking our for Elli. ;)
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 08:29AM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Elli is not gonna be able to hold out long she's gonna want to get some and so is justin. But I can def see Elli gettin all insecure thinking justin doesn't want her or somethin' cuz he's not kissin her! i can't believe Trace punched Justin! hopefully Elisha will keep him busy from now on. I like how Elli's so shy and innocent its different from all the other stories people write with Justin goin' out with a confident supermodel or something! Very good keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what happens! update soon, I'll be waitin'!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Bren! Like I've said before, you are just too nice to me. :) Every review from you is a major ego boost. LOL! I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter. I have a feeling you'll have quite a bit to say about that one. ;) Thanks again for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/10/05 - 11:37PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
how could she not! eek....i'd be ALL over that...damn
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 10:33PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
::stomps in frustration:: very LARGE grrrr....
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 08/10/05 - 09:00PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Man, Elli is so shy Justin might be in for a looong wait. In which case I see him breaking down and just going for it. lol And Elli's way of the breaking up the fight...lol at first I was like 'okay that's a good idea then she don't have to step into it.' But when I read the part when she closed her eyes and I was like 'girl, wth you doin?' lol I woulda been embarrassed that Elisha had to yell at me to stop if I were her. And Trace better have meant what he said about not having a crush on Elli, cause the more they were talkin about it the more I began to wonder if it was more than big brother to lil sister feelings there...unless we're talkin about the Jerry Springer/Kentucky version of sibling love. lol haha No offense to those who are from KY. And about the fighting...yeah, guys rather beat each up than talk it out, but then they get over it a helluva lot quicker than most girls do when they get into. Guys are weird like that though, they can go from play fighting to kicking the mess out of each other then be cool again. Don't work like that for girls, bitches wanna hold grudges forever and a day and try to break folks down on the mental/emotional level. lol Okay I went off on a whole tangent right there...so um in conclusion: Trace and Elisha need to work it out. Justin and Trace need to work it out. Justin and Elli need to work it out...in the bedroom. lol jk Update soon!
Author's Response: First off--yay! You reviewed. Thanks a bunch! Second I think I laughed after just about every sentence you wrote. LOL! You're reviews always leave me with a smile on my face. So thanks for that. I really enjoyed the part about the Jerry Springer/Kentucky sibling love thing (gross). You are right with your final conculsion and you should go check out the chapter I just posted to see if they all "worked it out."-----"Justin and Elli need to work it out...in the bedroom."--lmao. Thank for reviewing!
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