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Reviewer: dancewithurheart08
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/05 - 10:55AM
Title: The Exchange
hah! aw i feel so bad for this girl! she almost kissed justin timberlake himself and looses her balance! oh dear..lol!
Author's Response: Sucks to be her sometimes right? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 03/29/05 - 09:09PM
Title: The Exchange
really good so far! i'll read more later!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lilD
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 10:50PM
Title: The Exchange
Cute! She's such a klutz! (Not that i'm much better myself..lol) Update soon
Author's Response: LOL! We all have a little bit of a klutz in us. I'm sure Justin brings that quality out in girls. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 06:45PM
Title: The Exchange
Man she's a dufus. But ya know that sounds exactly like something I would do. I love it. But man she lost the oreo's. I happen to be a big fan of them I probably would have dove in after them, they are in a plastic wrapper they would have been just fine. I love the whole note thing reminds me of when I was younger and me and my bestfriend would hold her brothers stuffed animals ransom. Good times. And whether just thinks it or not thats sooo a date. And what a great one at that. Who wouldn't love lunch on a sail boat? Hmm probably people who get sea sick, especially mixing food in with it for them. But anyways thats besides the point. Haha great chapter. I love your stories i'm a HUGE fan. :) Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I always get a big smile on my face after reading your reviews. You always make me feel so good about myself with the great compliments you give. Thank you so much. Very cute about your love for Oreos and how you and your friends used to hold your brother's stuffed animals ransom. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 04:31PM
Title: The Exchange
Very Cute : )
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! :)
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 03/17/05 - 03:59PM
Title: The Exchange
For the sake of not saying something that's already been said 3 (maybe 4 depending on if someone sends a review in real quick) times before me...I won't even mention how ridiculously aww inducing and cute that ransom was. And I won't say anything about how Elli should watch the time, before she finds herself with another embarrassing lecture from her dear mummy to listen to. Nope I won't say anything about that at all. Because all of that has already been said before, and I'm much too original for that. lol Riiight...but I will say this... TBC... Ha, now you know how it feels. lol Whose got problems? I got problems. And I'm gonna shut up ahora.
Author's Response: LOL! I laughed right out loud when I read your review. It was definatly original! :) TBC...You're a riot! I'm so glad you liked the update. I was afraid people would think the ransom note was too cheesy or something but everyone who has reviewed so far has liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to write a great review. I really, really appreciate it!
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 03:04PM
Title: The Exchange
That ransom note was too cute. And completely funny, because in a way it seems like something Justin would do. Haha, I actually laughed AND snorted. Okay, well I snort on occasion. But hardly ever does a story make me do that. He's soo cute! I hate to fall in love with a character especially when he's mostly made up out of the mind of another chick, lolol. No offense. I liked that he blushed ..then tried to change the subject. They would be really cute together. Whether she's underage or not. I can't wait to see how their relationship turns out.
Author's Response: First of all I must tell you that I love reading long reviews that tell me specifically what you liked or didn't. Second I am honored that my story emitted a snort from you. LOL! And thank you so much for saying that I portrayed a believable Justin; that means I'm doing my "job" right. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 02:04PM
Title: The Exchange
The ransom was cute. She is so cute and klutzy though you got laugh that.
Author's Response: Thanks Gigi! Elli is an all class klutz....just like me. ;)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 01:24PM
Title: The Exchange
LOL! at the ransom note, dorky but cute. And uh oh... she could get in trouble being out so long if she's not careful...
Author's Response: You would think Elli would have learned her lession last time and just stayed at home. The things we do for Justin Timberlake. ;) Thanks for reivewing.
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