Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 03/22/05 - 11:30AM Title: Lick Me

aww damn sh eis clueless about him liking her lol 'kiss the girl' hahaha great story Update soon please :D

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much!


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 03/21/05 - 11:17AM Title: Lick Me

When he asked her that all she had to do was turn her head, presenting the cheek and smile a lil...he would have got it. But then, that's not her style. And plus the people working there were probably watching their every move, which would make it awkward too. What I'm about to say isn't my style at all, but it's true so here is it...this story just keeps getting cuter all the time. *sighs* There I said it...I swear I'm getting girlier all the time, but I refuse to become a girly girl. lol

Author's Response: LOL! Don't worry I don't think you're all girly girly now. I appreciate you telling that you think my story is cute. You are too funny! Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 03/21/05 - 09:42AM Title: Lick Me

Man she blew the whole lick thing. She should have smeared the ice cream all over her face and be like lick it all off. Its adorable that they have crushes on each other. And now they have to have another date. But I'm curious on what the freak & psycho are going to do. Poor Eli and her messed up friends and family.

Author's Response: LOL! You are too much sometimes Danyelle. I would have like to see what you would have done in that situation. Anwho, I don't think you have ever not mentioned the 'freak and psycho' in one of your reviews. LOL! I love you're reviews; they crack me up!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 03/21/05 - 08:22AM Title: Lick Me

AAAWWWW!!!!!! They both have a crush on each other! Too cute!

Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing! Glad you like!


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 03/20/05 - 10:59PM Title: Lick Me

Awww ..Elli has a crush! Cuuutee. I totally gets where she's coming from. I know thousands of girls who would sell their sole to be in the situation she was. But I bet all thousand of them would move if not quicker than she did for that napkin. Because not everyday do you get a "What would you do if I liked that icecream off your cheek?" from Mr. Timberlake. Her brain wasn't functioning ..or maybe it was. But she made a smart move. No good can come from licking, lolol. NO GOOD. But they're so cute. Even Justin ..he soo has a crush that he's trying so hard not to have. I don't think I can like this story more than I do now!

Author's Response: I just love reading your reviews! You always write nice long ones that give specific examples of things you liked or didn't or related too. I appreciate that because I know it takes time to do. Reviews like yours help me to update sooner. So thank you! Now to address what you wrote: I would have freaked out if the ice cream situation had happened to me too. Who wouldn't have?! Thanks so much for the awesome compliments! I look forward to readling more reveiws from you in the future.





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