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Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/29/05 - 03:43AM
Title: Na-kid
I'm so much like Elli! I have this horrible tendency to be the biggest klutz in the world in front of anyone even remotely attractive, and have probably scared off half of my dates with my tripping up etc but hey, that's what being a girl is all about, right? lol I like the start of this, and how Elli isn't just going to fall (catch my terrible pun) into Justin's arms. Great start!
Author's Response: YAY! You reviewed this story! Lol! Alot of people have told they're just like Elli too. I never realized how many klutzy people like me there were out there. :) Thanks bunches!
P.S. Loved the pun ;)
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/05 - 06:55PM
Title: Na-kid
This is so friggin' cute.
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 10:15PM
Title: Na-kid
woohoo thanks for updating this story. Such a great update but short :( I wanna know what will happens in this party...
Author's Response: No need to thank me for the update I should thank you for reading....so thanks! LOL! Sorry if that was kinda short but I had to leave it sort of up in the air to leave you wanting more. I'll update as soon as I can.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 04:12PM
Title: Na-kid
Stupid Liz, manipulating poor Elli into wearing that bikini! *lol* I would've made her wear it too.
Author's Response: LOL! Me too!
Reviewer: Justinscaramelsenorita
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 12:45PM
Title: Na-kid
Soo don't feel like signin in. LMAO, only Elli would assume that he was offering her an acoholic beverage. I bet she felt like a dumbass. But i'm so not secure with my body. And being half naked in front of Timberlake ..wouldn't make that any better. So, I definitely know where she's coming from. I think she falls over something in every chapter. That's so like me. I guess that's why I love her character so much. She reminds me so much of myself, it's uncanny. They are sooo cute together! ..Not together as in girlfriend/boyfriend. Obviously, because they're not together. But if they were it'd be AWESOME! lolol ..I think i'm done making an ass of my self by rambling. But your story makes me do that.
Author's Response: Another long review; awesmoe! LOL! I take the face that my story makes you ramble as a compliment, so thanks a bunch! We must have a lot in common because I base Elli loosly off myself. I'm glad you can relate. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 12:38PM
Title: Na-kid
Party hardy! Lol. Great couple of chapters I managed to miss by the way lol, I loved it when Justin asked to lick her! I can imagine how she feels being surrounded by half naked people, I don't think I could ever do that, my confidence wouldn't take it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Helena and don't worry about missing a few chapter; happens to everyone. Glad you caught and that you liked what you read. I know how you mean about lacking the confidence like Elli....that's makes it easier to write for her character I guess. Thanks again!
Reviewer: LilD
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 12:12PM
Title: Na-kid
Loved it!! : )
Author's Response: Thank You!
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