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Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 04/29/05 - 04:48AM
Title: Smudges
She should have enjoyed the closeness more LOL
I'll help kicking Trace
Author's Response: I know right?---"I'll help kicking Trace."--you and everyone else. lol. Thanks for reveiwing.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 09:49PM
Title: Smudges
Damn it! Wanted him to kiss her sooooo badly!! You have to update soon!
Author's Response: That's what everyone is saying. I'll try to update ASAP. Thanks!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 02:57PM
Title: Smudges
*kicks Trace*
Damn the man, just when we were gonna see some action...
Author's Response: You know I can't give the readers what they want right away. If I did there would be no suspense. Lol. Don't worry you'll see some 'action' eventually--I can't say when though. ;)
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 01:50PM
Title: Smudges
Elli is so cute when she's around Justin. Damn Trace, he always has to walk in at the wrong damn time.
Author's Response: Damn Trace! LOL! He just had to walk in at that exact moment didn't he? :) Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:59PM
Title: Smudges
Trace's always blocking Justin in almost every story that I read. *lol*
Author's Response: LOL! He is isn't he?
Reviewer: Laurencoz
Signed
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:45PM
Title: Smudges
That was so cute how he defended her! He is being so sweet and it's cute how she's all shy - it's great - keep it coming;)
Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much!
Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:39PM
Title: Smudges
OMg Ijust read the entire story in like an hour. It was so good. You so have to update now. It is so cute. I LOVE it. But what does Elli look like? I don't know if she's been described yet. BUt I love it. They are so cute. Honestly and I love how she jumped off the counter and hid behind him. Too cute!
Author's Response: How wonderful to see a new reader! Glad you're lovin it and I always appreciate reviews. I hadn't realized that I never described what Elli looks like so I'll make sure to add that into the next chapter (I guess I just had her pictured in my head and was thinking you all saw the same thing--I know you're not mind readers ;)
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 12:35PM
Title: Smudges
Wow. W..o..w.. Um ..I can't breathe? And that can't be good. But ..she did realoly well given that Justin was RIGHT inbetween her legs. What's up with these two. Move a little to left ..alittle to the right DIVEEEE and you're on top of each other. Gosh, not rocket science people. lolol ..He was sooo sexy in this chapter. And not doin' a damn thing either. Hell, that's like real life right there ..lolol. They almost KISSED I could taste it ..then fathead Trace had to come in and ruin EVERYTHING! But ..the mood was set. He was soo sweet and gentle ..GOSH ..the anticipation is rising ..I can't type anymore ..i'm too hot for all of this. Great as usual!
Author's Response: Wow to you too. LOL! Your reviews are always so long--I LOVE that! You give me the inspiration to update faster and try to make each chapter better than the last. Glad you enjoyed this chapter even if it was a bit frustrating for you. But just think, if it was frustrating for you that Elli and Justin didn't kiss imagine how they must feel. Thanks for reviewing!
P.S. Go take a cold shower to cool yourself off....lol!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 11:44AM
Title: Smudges
Oh my goodness...as Justin was saying all that stuff about tattoos I was thinking "They don't hurt that much, do they? I could totally get one on my thigh"...lol and I imagine Elli was thinking the same! Aw, I love Justin in this story. He's so sweet and gentle and...sigh-worthy, if that makes any sense at all!! Great update, oh-my-gosh-girl LOL ;)
Author's Response: LOL! You are too funny Teeny. I always love reading your reviews. You are always so sweet and funny and as you know I really respect your opinion because you are such an amazing author. So thanks so much for taking the time to review and I'm glad you're liking this story. ---"oh-my-gosh-girl"--laughed right out loud when I read that!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 11:22AM
Title: Smudges
Hmm I keep picturing him this his shirt off and what it would do to me if he kept rubbing up against me like that. And standing like that between my legs and hugging and being gentle. Awww, its just so adorable how they are together! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle! I would faint if I were ever in the situaion Elli was in with Justin. Too much skin and closeness for me....although I would enjoy it. ;)
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