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Reviewer: Teeny
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Date: 05/05/05 - 10:22AM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Justin in the shower = yum. Justin in the shower touching himself = yummier. LOL That was hot (ignore the similarity to Miss Hilton please) and I just dread to think about what Elli's going to do to sort of get back at her mom. Look at it like this: If her mom looked like she'd had sex, and Elli wants to give her a taste of her own medicine, then that means Elli has to look like she's had sex...hmmm, I see Justin coming in handy here...lmao An update is welcome =)
Author's Response: "Justin in the shower = yum. Justin in the shower touching himself = yummier. LOL That was hot (ignore the similarity to Miss Hilton please)"---You are too funny! I always find myself laughing at your reviews. :) Hmmm....maybe you're on to something with a way for Elli to get her mom back. I'm sure Justin would be more than willing to help out a friend in need....mwah! ;)
Reviewer: Gigi
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Date: 05/04/05 - 06:46PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Justin feening over a 17 year and Elli she is so cute with all babbling and stuff. Trace he can work a nerve though.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you're liking!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 05:36PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
cool..they are going to have lunch together..hehehe Hope Trace is not coming LOL
Author's Response: Thanks Lice!~
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 01:29PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Justin should really not try to be smart, it's not very becoming, whatever he thinks lol. And hey, if shes only a couple of months underage, there's nothing wrong with that in my book. As for her mother... I don't know what to say to that, maybe she's trying to be rebelious? Maybe she felt restricted in the rules she made? I hope she tries to be more understanding of Elli, and I hope she doesn't shove her new man down her throat. Oh yeah, and parents having sex is ALWAYS disgusting, no matter the situation lol. Good update!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for the review Helena. I can always count on you to write somthing nice and ususally humorous.
Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/05 - 01:11PM
Title: Trials of Being an Adult
Where to start ..oh yes, the whole shower scene. OF COURSE, being the pervert that I so naturally am ..I would have to talk about this first. He didn't do anything it was hot. I couldn't physically see it and it was STILL hot. Gosh ..and another thing ..lmaoo ..wth was "Is her house on fire" Yes ..because the first thing she would do if her house caught on fire would be to call the holier than thou, Justin Timberlake. Aww ..they're so sweet. Elli needs to understand that her mother is an ADULT and will make ADULT decisions ..and Elli needs to take it in an ADULT manner. I know she misses her father though. But yeah. the whole three adult thing? I think a certain Timberlake is trying to convince himself more than her. Yeah, she's 17 but every day she's closer to 18. If he thinks it that way ..he won't have a problem. Always think with the cup half full instead of half empty. You are sooo making me happy with all of the frequent updates!
Author's Response: Let me start off in much the same way that you did in mentioning the shower scene first--glad you liked it and if I ever put another scene like that in the story I'll be sure to tone it down for ya...or not. :)
Don't you know that if your house was on fire Justin Timberlake would be the first person you would call? I know I would....not. LOL!
You are 100 % correct with the whole Elli and her mother being an adult situation and about Justin trying to convince himself about Elli's adult-ness (that's not a word is it) more so that he is Elli. I don't know if I'm even making any sence so I'll just end her by saying thank you ever so much for reviewing and I look forward to seeing what you think of the coming chapters.
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