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Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 06/13/05 - 01:49PM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Damn Justin's being a little bitch. What the fuck is his problem? He's pissing me off. Sorry with the bad language but damn he needs to grow up and stop running his mouth before not knowing the truth and he's a hyprocrite. Ugh.

Author's Response: Don't worry about the bad language. Everyone seemed to be using quite a bit of bad language in their reviews after reading this chapter. Hmm...strange. LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Date: 06/12/05 - 08:26PM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

i don't know what's goin on with justin but he needs to get over himself. she shouldn't have run out just like that. she needs to channel her inner bitch and "knock" some sense into justin b/c that whole runnin away/cryin doesn't work for me. i hope his feels real shitty when he finds out what happened.

Author's Response: "she needs to channel her inner bitch"--LOL! You are too funny, but I totally agree. Elli is just too shy to do somthing like that. I don't think Elli even has a "inner bitch." Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 06/12/05 - 07:43AM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Justin, you are being a dick! For god sake, does it SOUND like Elli is the kind of girl to just go and sleep with someone? NO! OF COURSE NOT! God, if he wasn't such a...well, a man...then MAYBE he would've just thought before he opened his big ass mouth! And I can't believe he slept with that slut Allison...it's gonna take a whole lotta groveling to get out this one, Timberlake! Update soon, I love it!

Author's Response: I think you just about summed up how everyone has felt after reading this chapter--pissed. LOL! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. It's much appreciated. :)


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 06/11/05 - 03:54PM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

I understand that Justin's hungover and bitter from thinking that Trace and Elli have been sexing it up. But damn...that last line he says...had my eyes bugged out. That was definitely an Oh, hell naw! moment. She should have set him straight right then and there and had him the one feeling stupid and embarrassed. But that's not her style... either way he's gotta feel bad, even though she didn't go off on him like I would have liked to see. Her crying should have a worse effect on him. Stupid boy.

Author's Response: "Stupid boy"--Well I think that about sums it up. Boys can be so stupid sometimes can't they? And yes Justin's comment was quite harsh and I'm not surpried it had your eyes bugging out. It was mean. Thanks so much for the great review and I look forward to seeing what you think of the next chapter. :)


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 02:08PM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Justin you ass! Ugh! Must update pronto!

Author's Response: I'm on it! Thanks for reviewing.


Reviewer: god gave me style Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 01:12PM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Justin is such an ass! He can get away with sleeping with some whore but Elli can't fuck Trace? BULLSHIT!!

Author's Response: BULLSHIT is right! LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing. I'll be updating shortly.


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 04:32AM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

That was not nice of Justin..if only Elli would just speak up fpr herself...LOL

Author's Response: That wasn't very nice was it? I know I would have ripped him a new one if I were Elli. But Elli is very shy and doesn't have the self esteem to really stand up for herself and tell Justin just what is on her mind. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 04:30AM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

*sings* Justin is a manwhore... I hope Justin's blood really does boil after jumping to those conclusions, I hope he admits his feelings for once already! Geat update!

Author's Response: "*sings* Justin is a manwhore"--Laughed so hard when I read that. LOL! Thank so much for taking the time to review. :)


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 03:22AM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Justin's an asshole. A hypocritical asshole at that. I realllllly hope Trace rips him a new one on Elli's behalf.

Author's Response: That seems to be the general consensous. LOL! Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 12:30AM Title: Early Mornin’ Blues and What Happens When You ASS-U-ME

Why do always review for the wrong chapters! lol Have I reviewed before? I dunno! But anyway, hi lol Um..Justin is DISGUSTING..he sleeps with that girl and he didn't even care? He's like "Yea I know she hates my friend/love interest and totally dissed her, but oh well. She's hot!" JERK! Then he has the nerve to diss her for supposedly sleeping w/ Trace? After what he did? Somebody punch him in the face :( He's gonna feel like crap and he deserves that and more! Ok, I'm calm now lol Update soon! :D

Author's Response: Don't worry about it. It happens to the best of us. LOL! I responded to your other review....





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