Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 06/15/05 - 02:12PM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

I'm not a fan of the cop boyfriend or psycho mom or dumb Justin. Poor Elli living the life with complete idiots. Hopefully it will get better! Great update.

Author's Response: I don't think anyone is a big fan of the "cop boyfriend, psycho mom, or dumb Justin." At least Elli still has Trace to keep her sane. :) Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 06/15/05 - 12:28PM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

Her day just really keeps on getting better

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 06/15/05 - 06:53AM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

Justin is an arsehole. That is all. And poor Elli being thrust into 'family' life all over again with a guy she doesn't really like. Great update!

Author's Response: Justin is an arsehole. That is all.--LOL! Straight and to the point aren't ya? Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/15/05 - 03:38AM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

Typical bloody man. Does he really think "I was hungover" is really a valid excuse for treating a so-called friend like shit and accusing them of being nothing but a cheap slut? I know h'e famous and all but is he really stupid enough to think him giving her a little smirk and a flash of pearly whites makes up for him completely letting her down and being a bastard to top it all off?? As for her mother... the hyperness of the "let's be a family now" thing is ridiculous. You can;t just force a boyfriend on a teenage daughter and expect immediate bonding - especially by mandatory co-ercion. I'm glad Elli has Trace because everybody else is just sucking right now. And man I've rambled enough so I'm gonna quit now *lol*

Author's Response: Don't worry about rambling on--I quite enjoyed reading that. LOL! You sounded very frustrated with this past chapter (as did most of my readers) but I hopefully you won't be so frustrated after reading the next update. Thanks so very much for reviewing!


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 06/14/05 - 11:36PM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

URGH. Justin is an arse. Update soon!

Author's Response: I second that!


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 06/14/05 - 11:33PM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

Ok, I'm calmer this time lol Ew, THAT was his apology and she's supposed just fall in his arms now? So he denies having feelings for her and still doesn't apologize for sleeping with that uh..what'd trace call her..that barbie? lol He was so busy sucking her face he doesn't even kow whats going on now lol She should stay mad for atleast another chapter. And um..Justin should feel worse..a lot worse :D lol Update soon!

Author's Response: Justin apology was kind of pathetic wasn't it? But what can you say; he is a guy. LOL! Don't worry about Elli forgiving him too soon. She may not be able to speak her mind to tell Justin off, but she knows how hold a grude. :) Thanks for the great review.


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 06/14/05 - 10:34PM Title: From Worse to Worse...er?

My girl needs a lil backbone. I like the story a lot and hope that you update very soon. Thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I so glad to hear you're lovin' this story so much.





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