Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl Anonymous Date: 07/17/05 - 12:47AM Title: Caught

mmm, that was hot. i would kill to be kissing justin like that!! now i wonder what he's gonna do to trace...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it. I always love to hear what peopel think of my stories. :)


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 06:05PM Title: Caught

Awww that whole chapter was just to cute for words. Now we don't have to worry about them running around asking if they like each other and being all dumb! Loved it. You always do such a wonderful job! Keep it up!

Author's Response: "Now we don't have to worry about them running around asking if they like each other and being all dumb!"--LOL! Glad you liked and thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Teeny Signed Date: 07/14/05 - 02:50PM Title: Caught

Trace, just go and stand in the corner for a minute!! What Justin and Elli had going on was hoootttt. That kissing at the start was yummy! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you bunches and I'm glad you liked. Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 01:13PM Title: Caught

*smacks Trace* Well that's what you get for spying you nosy git!

Author's Response: LOL!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 12:03PM Title: Caught

They're finally making out and there's no tongue!!!!!! What the hell!!!!!! I demand some tongue-lashings in the next chapter! *waves fist angrily* Oh, and keep Justin from between Elli's legs...he's such a pervert.

Author's Response: I can't guarentee there will be any "tongue-lashings" in the next chapter but I'll consider it. :) Now just remember you never specified just whose tongues would be lashing....mwahahaha!


Reviewer: Ashlie Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 09:23AM Title: Caught

Amazing! I loved it. Hope to see Justin's perspective on the kiss. I can't wait to seee where this is going! Update soon!!!

Author's Response: I will definitly start the next chapter out with Justin's POV--just for you. :) Thanks so much for reviewing.


Reviewer: god gave me style Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 08:15AM Title: Caught

I wanna make out with Justin too :(. Oh well, I can live through Elli I guess. Is Trace getting a bit jealous? Oh uh, there's gonna be trouble. Anyway, great chapter, I love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing--much appreciated. :) Glad you're loving this story.


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 07:23AM Title: Caught

*sigh* I wanna make out with Justin like that... Great chapte!

Author's Response: *Sigh* Don't we all...don't we all....


Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/14/05 - 06:41AM Title: Caught

Yay! Great chapter. This is the perfect start to my day. However, I've got to let you know that I don't appreciate that ending. Couldn't you tell us whether he was the happy Justin, or the annoyed Justin, or the little-bit-of-both Justin? Oh well, I guess that just means that I'll have to read the next update, so make it as fast as possible.

Author's Response: Awe, thank you. You are too kind. :) Sorry you didn't like the ending but hopefully I'll make it up to you in the coming chapters. Thanks a bunch for reviewing. Can't wait to hear what you think of the next chapter. :)


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 07/14/05 - 05:14AM Title: Caught

*Squeeeeeeeee* LOL OMG!! i'm so happy for Elli!!! She is just so damned lucky!!! Trace and Elisha should be burned alive for interrupting them.

Author's Response: LOL! A little violent are we? :) Glad you liked and thanks a bunch for reviewing!





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