Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 07/20/05 - 11:48AM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

Aaaawwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He tried to cook for her! Now that's some deep love going on there. Ooh, I can't wait to get Elli's expression once Liz and Elisha finish.

Author's Response: There is nothing better than a man cooking for his woman. Am I right? Even if he can't cook. LOL! It's the thought that counts right? Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 07/20/05 - 11:07AM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

poor justin...can't cook!!!

Author's Response: LOL! It's pathetic isn't it?


Reviewer: memyself Anonymous Date: 07/19/05 - 11:37PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

I go shopping on Rodeo Drive all the time, they have HOT dresses *sarcasim b/c I'm broke) Aw, they getting ready for they're datey date. Justin tried to cook! Loser! No, really, that's sweet. I like cooking, I'll help him out. One day, there will be a story will KNOW how to cook lol Great as usual, more soon.

Author's Response: That's so funny--I shop at Rodeo Drive all the time too! I'm suprised I've never seen you there (insert sarcasm). LOL! Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :)


Reviewer: stimble Signed Date: 07/19/05 - 10:30PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

i wanna go shopping on rodeo drive. tear.....yeah...that's cute, justin tried to cook...awwww....that dork

Author's Response: LOL! I wanna go shopping on Rodeo Drive too but I live in NC and don't have nearly enough money for it. I'll just have to keep dreaming. :) Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you like.


Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/19/05 - 10:13PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

I love the way Trace plays older bro to both of them; tormenting J and being overprotective of Elli. Now, this kinda goes back to the last chapter, but what is going on with him and Elisha? She finally admits to herself that she still loves him, and he seems sick of her. You know I love the story, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review and I'm glad your still liking this story. Almost everyone who reviewed this chapter said the same thing as you--that they loved Trace. As for him and Elisha's feelings towards one another you'll just have to wait and see what happens there. Oh and it may seem like Trace is sick of her because after all she did dump him, you know? Thanks!


Reviewer: Nikki g. Anonymous Date: 07/19/05 - 08:02PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

I absolutely love, and I mean love, love this story. I don't know what else to say but J is so cute getting upset and trying to cook for her. I wanna know though when mother deary will find out the truth as well as J. Update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: Awe, you are just too sweet. *blushes* Thank you so much for the great compliment. I just love reading your reviews!


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 07/19/05 - 07:19PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

I just simply love Trace in this story he has been coming to everyone's rescue, he doesn't get as much credit as he deserves. I think its cute how Justin is trying to cook for her even though he can't, and its sweet of Liz and Elisha for helping Elli out. But I still have my eye on Liz she is still very questionable about her saneness..:)

Author's Response: That's what everyone has been saying--that they love Trace--Glad you liking the where the story is going and hopefully Liz will redeem herself eventually. :) Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 07/19/05 - 06:28PM Title: Good Idea Gone Bad

Aww Trace is so cute.He turns to me with a huge smile covering his face. “I get it now. You wanted to do something special for our little Elli didn’t you? Isn’t that just precious?” He laughs pinching my cheeks and speaking in baby talk. I push him roughly away from me. My favorite line in the whole story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. Wow, can't believe you liked that line so much. :) Thanks!





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