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Reviewer: Pinkfairy Signed Date: 07/22/05 - 03:16PM Title: And Then There Were Two

cute story....im lovin it. and uh, yah elli seems to be coming out of her shell (somewhat)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm love to hear that people are loving my story. It makes me feel so wonderful to know I was able to entertain you if just for a bit. Thanks so much for reviewing!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:43PM Title: And Then There Were Two

Trust a guy to take the pussy's way out and start grilling.... And a Kiss the Cook apron? I HAVE ONE OF THOSE!! Lol I mean, er, no I don't, why the hell would I invest in something so silly... Moving swiftly on lol, Elli seems to be doing well so far, I would have expected her to have fallen over AT LEAST three times by now...LOL Fantabulous update, you know I like 'em speedy!

Author's Response: LOL! I can't believe you have a Kiss the Cook apron too! I thought I was alone....er...I mean I don't have one either. :p As far as Elli not falling yet, let me just remind you that this date has barely begun and the night is still young. Thanks a bunch for reviewing and there is another speedy update on it's way. I just have to finish reply to my reviews....


Reviewer: justinzgirlkb Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:03PM Title: And Then There Were Two

i love this story..i wanna see how the date goes!! ahhhhh.... great.

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks bunches for reviewing!


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 11:53AM Title: And Then There Were Two

Aww, bless Justin and his 'kiss the cook' apron, lol. I hope this date goes well and I'm glad Trace and Elisha are back on track. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter.


Reviewer: Danyellle Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 11:04AM Title: And Then There Were Two

How cute! Not really sure what to say I love to review and leave some comments but I leave em everytime that i seem to get redudent so I don't know what to say. lol. But I do know that this story is just wonderful. I love reading every second of it. great job

Author's Response: I love reviews and they don't seem redundent to me. I don't care if you always write the same thing or not, I just love to hear what you think. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review.


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 10:16AM Title: And Then There Were Two

Aaaawwwww!!!!!!! They're both just so "gosh darn cute"! Is it just me, or is it creepy that a grown-ass man said that...even if it is Justin, and he's nervous.

Author's Response: It is a bit creepy, but the fact that it was Justin that said it makes it okay in my book. ;) Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 09:59AM Title: And Then There Were Two

I can just imagine Justin cussing up a storm as he burns everything in sight *lol*

Author's Response: LOL! Me too!


Reviewer: amk16 Signed Date: 07/21/05 - 07:20AM Title: And Then There Were Two

Elisha and Trace + Justin and Elli= great entertainment. I don't why I even bother to say it, because I'm sure you already know how "gosh darn" awesome this story is. I thought the same thing- like, where the heck did he get that one from. Can't wait for another update. Keep up the wonderful writing.

Author's Response: Awe, you are just too good to me! You're reviews always make me feel so good because you are just so nice. Thanks so much for the review and I can't wait to read what you think of the coming chapter.


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:47AM Title: And Then There Were Two

damn, i must've hit the typo record or something .."how would you LIKE IT if someone cut into you .." now you can laugh ...and sweet not sweat ..and i can't remember it all. okay well just remember i'm medicated ..and that's my only excuse right now.

Author's Response: That makes a bit more sense. LOL! Don't worry about any typos. I'm sure I do the same thing. :)


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 07/21/05 - 01:45AM Title: And Then There Were Two

okay, on the whole review thing ..i'm not sure i understand. it has 33 and 35 but not 34. hmm, okay ...well first i'm sure that elli's outfit was GOSH DARN cuteee. it was nice of elisha to help her out. and elisha's lucky now i won't have to kill her in her sleep. but um ..yeah 200 dollar skirt? it would not even feel my hips i'm tellin' ya. i wouldn't let the richest person in the world buy that for me. but it was really sweat of Trace to offer. of course, i never knew Trace had that much money ..but i always said he mooched --i mean ..nevermind. i guess Liz is an okay gal ..i'll just wait for her to annoy me in a diff chapter to say anthing different. but Justin trying to cook was soo cute. even if he did burn everything in the house. i wouldn't be surprised if he would actually cook that way. but ew ..about rare? ..i know red meat is good and all and we all love it ..but not LITERALLY ..i don't want to have to sit down to a nice yummy steak and as i'm about to cut into it say "HEY YOU, how would you live if someone tried to cut into mooooo (you)" get it moo? haha, i crack myself up ..anyways ..lmao when he said .."i didn't know she even knew who bon jovi was" i was cracking up. and i'm sick so basically i was coughin up a lung too. but it was funny. Gosh, justin, she's 17 ..not TWO. omg ..but i love elli and justin together. and even though they're happy and i have bad feelings about this. i'm just not gonna let my intuition get the best me of. i loves it, as always darlin.

Author's Response: You probably missed my update before this one because it didn't stay on the main update page all that long. I updated at the same time a bunch of other people did. Anyway, I'm glad you did catch the update and that you thought it was just so GOSH DARN cute. LOL! We all know most men can't cook and that doesn't exclude anyone of them, including famous pop stars. :) Rare is nasty but to Justin's defense he was just messin' with Elli. But I'm totally feelin' ya on the nastiness there. I'm so sorry your sick and that my story almost made you "cough up a lung." I'm sooo sorry. Justin was a little niave about the Bon Jovi thing--everyone knows Bon Jovi. :) What do you mean you have a bad feeling? Do you really think I would have anything bad happen? That just does not sound like me. You know how much I hate drama.....*silence*.....Mwahahaha! Yeah right! Anywho, glad your lovin it and thanks lots of bunches for taking the time to leave me yet another really long and really great review!





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