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Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/05 - 12:36PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Just when Elli and Justin were finally getting to first base...(at least I think it's first base, I can't remember LOL) Lynn decides to make a guest appearance! Can't she see there's little she can do to add to the situation? She should just leave them be. Oh, and poor Justin. If someone bit my tongue, I'd smack them down LOL
Author's Response: Dang girl, you're so violent. LOL! I don't know if that's first base or not either but they were defineitly exploring unknown territory. They always get interrupted at the worst times don't they? Anywho, thanks bunches for reviewing.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 04:43PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
It was getting so sensual!! Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! An update is on it's way!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 11:40AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
LOL Hilarious. That would be soo painful to have someone bite your tounge. Especially just thinkin how much it hurts when you bite your own. Hahaha they always seem to get interupted that would be horrible. Soo funny I would pay to see something like that. Haha great chapter.
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you found that chapter so amusing and I could make you laugh. I just hope nothing even remotely close to that ever happens to me. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 11:13AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
*lmao* Leave it to Momma Lynn to come in and interrupt things. Hopefully this time, Elli won't run away crying. And hopefully they lie about her age, we don't want the media making Justin out to look like R. Kelly. That would be bad...even though, 17 is the age of consent where I live (or is it 16? hmm). And I swear to Jesus, Mary, & Joseph, Justin better not try to sex Elli up...I'd be highly upset if anything remotely sexual happened between those two.
Author's Response: "And I swear to Jesus, Mary, & Joseph, Justin better not try to sex Elli up...I'd be highly upset if anything remotely sexual happened between those two."-- LOL! Most readers want them to get to doing the nasty already. It's nice to see someone wants to perserve Elli's innocence. :) Even though I agree that nothing should happen I cannot promise that JT won't try anything. We'll see what happens. Thanks for reviewing!.
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 09:47AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
i can't wait to see if Elli freaks over the tongue or if Lynn flips and if she knows how old Elli is!!! update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: More is coming soon. I'm working and update right now....well not right this very moment because I'm responding to your review, but as soon as I'm done I'll be working on an update. Anywho, thanks for reviewign!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 08:51AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
I loved the chapter, I love dthat Elli seems to be more open and confortable around Justin...
ha I can't wait for her point of view on the french kiss haha
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreicate it!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 05:51AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Ya know, I'm almost hoping Lynn is gasping was for knowing how young Elli is, because if she's still getting shocked and scandalised because her 24 year old has kissed a girl.... in other news, I am thrilled that somebody else uses the word "zonked" because any time I say it I get looked at like I'm nuts
Author's Response: I am thrilled that somebody else uses the word "zonked"--I say that all the time! LOL! It's nice to know that I'm not alone either. Thanks so much for reviewing and I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter.
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/05 - 12:43AM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Wow, Elli is SO innocent, I mean I'm her age and I'm not THAT sheltered, I'm not a ho either mind you lol Ha, so does Lynn know how old Elli is, if not well Justin's 20 something he can make out with girls in his own house if he wants! lol But when she DOES find out how old she is..UH OH! lol Great chapter, yay for making out! lol Can't wait to see what happens next more soon!
Author's Response: As is evident in previous chapters, Elli's mother has kept her very sheltered so it's really no surpise how innocent she really is. Yes, it should be quite interesting to see just how Lynn reacts to Elli's legal status. Thanks bunches for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 - 11:10PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
That was great. My girl is slowly becoming a woman. Lol. However, did Lynn have to do that? Does she know that she's a minor cause I know she knows that J isn't virginal. This shall be interesting. Funny as hell chica and I loved it. Thanks and update soon. J&B!
Author's Response: Glad you liked! As I've told a number of other loyal reviewers like youself, you'll just have to wait until the next update before you find out if Justin's Mamma knows about Elli's age and just want had her so upset. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/05 - 11:07PM
Title: An All Out “Tongue Lashing”
Whoah, that was a dope ass line ending there. Haha. I loved it. Clever, my dear. Anyways, this story is so cute. =) Elli is such an innocent one, lmao. I'm likin' it so far. I just got caught up though, cus I'm like the slowest reader ever when I try to read a million stories plus write and everything else. Great job hon!
Author's Response: "Whoah, that was a dope ass line ending there"--Thank you very much. I was quite proud at myself for coming up with that line. Not to toot my own horn or anything. LOL! Glad you got caught up and I can't wait to read what you think of the coming chapter.
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