Reviews For Holes
Reviewer: Lice Anonymous Date: 08/04/05 - 03:06PM Title: Meeting Momma

poor justin!! LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 08/04/05 - 10:57AM Title: Meeting Momma

Trace's right, Justin is slowly sucking the innocence right outta Elli. Oh yea, pun intended.

Author's Response: "Pun intended."--LOL! Funny girl, very funny. :)


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 08/04/05 - 07:07AM Title: Meeting Momma

Great Trace. Reallllllllllllllllllll subtle. Honestly, men! Lynn was very nice about that, but if Justin thinks he's going to keep the minor thing quiet for 8 months, he's deluded.

Author's Response: I guess that wasn't really smooth was it? But, hey at least he got her out of the house. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 08/04/05 - 04:08AM Title: Meeting Momma

Aww, poor thing. She keeps on embarassing herself. But it's cute. Update soon.

Author's Response: The story just wouldn't be the same if Elli wasn't embarssaing herself in one way or another. :) Thanks so much!


Reviewer: stimble Signed Date: 08/04/05 - 01:02AM Title: Meeting Momma

all i can continue to say is ouch.....

Author's Response: LOL!


Reviewer: tanya Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 11:27PM Title: Meeting Momma

oh gawd! SHE BIT HIS TONGUE!!! ugh that has got to be the most embarrasing thing ive ever heard of. i owuld literally die! loved it!

Author's Response: I know! Thanks for reviewing!


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 10:26PM Title: Meeting Momma

Oh wow. that chapter SUCKED. No, I'm just kidding lol I can't beleive she bit his tongue, OWWW! I hurt thinking about. See, I knew Lynn was cool, I see why she was upset now. Ok well, more soon!

Author's Response: LOL! I warned you that chapter was bad. ;) Hopefully this next chapter won't "suck." Thanks a bunch for reviewing!


Reviewer: Nikki G. Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 09:53PM Title: Meeting Momma

It was hella funny but i feel so bad for her. it was her first time and then lynn goes and scares the buhjeezes out off her and in response almost bites his tongue off. I soooooo love this story so please update soon and thanks. J&B!

Author's Response: That would be kind of embarassing wouldn't it? I think I would have literaly died right then and there. Glad your liking and I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter!


Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Date: 08/03/05 - 09:41PM Title: Meeting Momma

Oooooh I want them to make out again. Lynn handled it very well!!!! More updates realllllll soonm please!!!!

Author's Response: That will come with time. You must leave time for Justin's tongue to heal. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!





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