Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 08/12/05 - 11:24AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Bless Trace's heart! Great, now I sound like my Grandma. I'm glad Trace's there, they need a chaperone. I don't trust Justin. It'd be okay if Elli wasn't so, how you say, "inexperienced".
Author's Response: LOL! You do not sound like your Grandma. Well I guess you might--I've never met your grandma. Anyway, I think that you are the only one who does not want Justin to corrupt Elli. Most everyone else wants to see them 'get it on.' LOL! Thanks for reviewing and looking our for Elli. ;)
Reviewer: stimbleSignedDate: 08/08/05 - 11:04PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
maybe you should have ellie or justing smack trace with a pillow. Next time justin should just lock his door.
Author's Response: Locking the door would be a pretty simple solution to thier little problem wouldn't it? Too bad Justin wasn't able to think of that. Although, Trace probably would have just pounded on the door until they opened up. LOL! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Bren
AnonymousDate: 08/08/05 - 08:38PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Super cute I just read it over agin! Damn! Get Trace a girl for gods sake! I knowhe's worried about Justin pressurin' Elli but give them some room please! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Awe, I could just squeeze you to death! You are just too nice--readin' that chapter again. Just makes me want to smile. Thank you!
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 08/08/05 - 09:53AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Have no fear, your lazy ass reader is here! lol Anyways, Trace needs a girlfriend, real bad. That should be one of Justin's goals from now on, unless he wants Trace to keep poppin up at the most inopportune moments like he is. And what's up with him and Elisha? They need to get together if only so that will distract Trace long enough so Justin can begin to corrupt our lil' Elli. :D I mean, it's like Justin 'corruptin' someone is a bad thing...who wouldn't want that? haha And Steve...I have a feeling he's gonna be a problem in the future for their relationship. Maybe something even as horrible as walking in on the two of them together or something. ...I want some s'mores now, dammit! The closest thing I've ever had to a real one was those s'mores flavored Pop Tarts. lol Well since I'm back, you know what the means, right? Now you get the pleasure of writing another chapter! haha :D Update soon!
Author's Response: Yay!!! My "lazy ass reader" is back!!! I've missed you bunches! I think just about every other person has said the same thing about Trace needing to back off and in time he will....I think. ;) How insightful of you to think of the possible future problems with Steve--very observant of you. *wink, wing*. After writing that chapter I really wanted a s'more too. LOL! Oh I'm so glad that I know have the pleasure of writing another chapter just for you. :) Thanks so much for reviewing--love it!. Another update will be posted shortly.
Reviewer: amk16SignedDate: 08/07/05 - 09:57PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
I've been M.I.A. for a while, but it's good to be back. OMG, can Trace please stop being a cockblocker! Not that Justin's trying to get her in bed, but if they're ever going to have a relationship, Trace needs to back down. It's really cute that he's overprotective, but he needs Elisha to help take his mind off of other people's love lives. Please update soon!
Author's Response: "Cockblocker"--???? Where do you come up with this stuff? LOL! Anywho, you are right about Trace needing to give them some space in order for them to start a real relationship. If only someone could explain that to him.....Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lice
AnonymousDate: 08/07/05 - 07:37PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Awww
they are so cute!!!
Trace needs ro chill out. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 08/07/05 - 01:00AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Oh, shit. I messed up AGAIN.. Okay I promise...I'm shutting up now. Even if there are more typos...LOL. I can accept that. Sorry I clogged up the review space. LOL. Forgive me?
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! You are too funny. :) Laughing...
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 08/07/05 - 01:00AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
Damn...I'm lovin IT. I'm love IT. Learn how to type, Jess! *Dies*
Author's Response: LOL! I knew what you meant.
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 08/07/05 - 12:59AM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
HEEEY mama. Oh my, oh my...I'm late on my reviews as always ...BUT. Um, can I just say, Trace, you're annoying as all fuck? LOL. I mean, honestly, why he gotta be all up in Justin's nuts and shit? LOL. It's like---just--back UP. Ahem. Moving on--Justin and Elli are too cute. Whee yaya! Loves it! Oh and this line: “Hey there are plenty of women out there who would pay good money to have me lick them!” I laugh. ROFL....pay? Hmm....that all depends on where I'm payin' you to lick, Mr. Timberlake......Oh my gah, JK. LOL. That was slutty! hahaha. Oopsie. ;) Update soon, cus
baaaaadaaat baaaaaaa...I'm lovin' in. =)
Author's Response: LOL! That review was quite random and very funny. Thanks for the laugh. "Hmm....that all depends on where I'm payin' you to lick, Mr. Timberlake......Oh my gah, JK. LOL. That was slutty! hahaha. Oopsie."--LOL! I laughed so hard when I read that. Glad to see you caught up on reviewing and I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the next chapter.
Reviewer: tanya
AnonymousDate: 08/06/05 - 11:51PM
Title: A Houseguest, S’mores, and a Pillow War
if i were justin i would of took one of the pillows and smacked him upside the head than told him to get the hell out!
great chapter cant wait for more :o)
Author's Response: LOL! A little violent arent' we. :) Thanks for reviewing.
