|
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 08:29AM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Elli is not gonna be able to hold out long she's gonna want to get some and so is justin. But I can def see Elli gettin all insecure thinking justin doesn't want her or somethin' cuz he's not kissin her! i can't believe Trace punched Justin! hopefully Elisha will keep him busy from now on. I like how Elli's so shy and innocent its different from all the other stories people write with Justin goin' out with a confident supermodel or something! Very good keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what happens! update soon, I'll be waitin'!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Bren! Like I've said before, you are just too nice to me. :) Every review from you is a major ego boost. LOL! I can't wait to read what you think of the next chapter. I have a feeling you'll have quite a bit to say about that one. ;) Thanks again for the wonderful review!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 08/10/05 - 11:37PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
how could she not! eek....i'd be ALL over that...damn
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 10:33PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
::stomps in frustration:: very LARGE grrrr....
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 08/10/05 - 09:00PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Man, Elli is so shy Justin might be in for a looong wait. In which case I see him breaking down and just going for it. lol And Elli's way of the breaking up the fight...lol at first I was like 'okay that's a good idea then she don't have to step into it.' But when I read the part when she closed her eyes and I was like 'girl, wth you doin?' lol I woulda been embarrassed that Elisha had to yell at me to stop if I were her. And Trace better have meant what he said about not having a crush on Elli, cause the more they were talkin about it the more I began to wonder if it was more than big brother to lil sister feelings there...unless we're talkin about the Jerry Springer/Kentucky version of sibling love. lol haha No offense to those who are from KY. And about the fighting...yeah, guys rather beat each up than talk it out, but then they get over it a helluva lot quicker than most girls do when they get into. Guys are weird like that though, they can go from play fighting to kicking the mess out of each other then be cool again. Don't work like that for girls, bitches wanna hold grudges forever and a day and try to break folks down on the mental/emotional level. lol Okay I went off on a whole tangent right there...so um in conclusion: Trace and Elisha need to work it out. Justin and Trace need to work it out. Justin and Elli need to work it out...in the bedroom. lol jk Update soon!
Author's Response: First off--yay! You reviewed. Thanks a bunch! Second I think I laughed after just about every sentence you wrote. LOL! You're reviews always leave me with a smile on my face. So thanks for that. I really enjoyed the part about the Jerry Springer/Kentucky sibling love thing (gross). You are right with your final conculsion and you should go check out the chapter I just posted to see if they all "worked it out."-----"Justin and Elli need to work it out...in the bedroom."--lmao. Thank for reviewing!
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 08:49PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
Aw, I'm not first, oh well :( That could turn out to be a bad idea Justin, but while Elli is thinking, I'll step in, mmk? You can corrupt me. :D Oh, I'm sorry, caught up in the moment there. AHEM, yea so, that could easily backfire, but I see where he's coming from, Elli should step up too if she wants it to work. Who knows, I sense drama though. PLEASE let Trace get with Elisha, gosh he PUNCHED Justin..just man..he needs to get it together, I understand protectivness of Elli but learn to BACK down lol Ok, that's all for now lol More soon!
Author's Response: We can't all be first :( LOL! Don't worry you're review means just as much to me whether you're the very first reviewer or the the last. Anywho, back to what you actually said about the story. I'm sure Justin would love to have you step in for Elli in the corruption department, LOL! It's nice to see that you're looking at the situation from both Justin and Elli's POV. Most readers tend to only sypethize (spelled that wrong--too lazy to fix it) with just one of the characters. I just updated right before I came to respond to this so go check it out. Thanks!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 05:27PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
how could she not?
That goes for me too, he wouldn't even have to ask me to kiss him, I'd be all over his ass! I hope Trace and Elisha get back together so Justin and Elli can get their groove on! Great update!
Author's Response: LOL! I can imagine....Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:46PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
I agree with Hollie on points 1&2. Oh yeah and update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:34PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
1) Please tell me Trace and Elisha are back together and Trace is going to quit obsessing. 2) MEN. We can't talk about our feelinsg so let's punch them out... 3) what's the betting Elli ends up in more tears because Justin appears to have stopped kissing her??? Grrrrrrrrrrr these people frustrate me *lol*
Author's Response: 1) You'll have to wait until the next update (at least) to find out if Trace and Elisha are back together. And even if they do get back together that doesn't neccisarily mean that he will back off Elli and Justin. 2) Dido to what you said.... 3) Tears are very possible but don't underestimate her just yet. She may prove to be more....I mean less shy and innocent than you think. 4) Thanks a bunch for reviewing and reading!!!! :)
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 03:27PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
something like that happened in a story i read before
Author's Response: What happened in a story you read before? The whole thing or just a small part? I hope that you still liked the chapter...
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 12:55PM
Title: Ridding of The "Trace Factor"
haha Elli will have to go and 'get it' that's good, Justin has been the one doing everything.
Can't wait for the next chapters! YAY. lol
Author's Response: It's about time Elli did some work, right? LOL! Hopefully Justin will be able to hold out until she's ready to iniciate. Thanks for reviewing!
|
