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Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 10:52AM
Title: Game Over
Thank goodness Elisha has a big mouth! Without her, Justin and Elli would still be stuck not touching each other...which is a good thing according to Trace. I don't want Justin corrupting her, he can touch her all he wants...within certain boundaries.
Author's Response: Funny, most reviewers can't stand Elisha's "big mouth." But you are correct. Elisha's big mouth is what got them together in the first place. Don't you worry about Justin--Elli wouldn't let him take advantage of her, but someone has to take her innocence and wouldn't you rather it be Justin? LOL! Thanks for revieiwng!
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 08/15/05 - 12:04AM
Title: Game Over
aww...honey. I don't know what else to say, but I feel her pain. Hopefully she'll realize that th only reason that this happened in the first place was so h could confirm her feelings for him. It's stupid, I know, but if she thought about it, she'll probably end up seeing what a nervous dork he can be sometimes. Maybe she'll even become more comfy around him. As always, update soon.
Author's Response: As you pointed out, Justin can be a nervous dork at times-I guess that would make Justin and Elli have more in common than they realize. Thanks so much for reviewing and Elli will be comfty with Jusitn soon enough *winks*.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 08/14/05 - 08:03PM
Title: Game Over
Elisha would'nt be my friend LOL
Poor Elli, embarassed again!!
Author's Response: When is Elli not embarassed? LOL! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 05:30PM
Title: Game Over
Elisha is my kinda girl! I would tell his ass off too if I were her but I wanna see Elli get some backbone and stand up to Justin. This was a great update and I can't wait for the next part! You seriously have me hooked on this story!
Author's Response: You are the only one who likes Elisha right now and the way she acted. LOL! It's good to be different. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I can't tell you how great it made me feel to read that you're hooked. Thanks!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 11:29AM
Title: Game Over
Oh LORD, Elisha has such a big mouth. I would have popped that bitch in the head if she was doin' all that to me. And Elli--that poor bitch. ROFL. I mean, she really needs to get over her fears and just kiss Justin or something. But then again, Justin is a huge freakin idiot...so who knows anymore! I'm just--shambles! LOL. Make this all better woman!
Author's Response: *Shakes Head* So violent...lol! Elli's trying and if she's anything like the reviewers of this story one day she'll just cave and jump his bones. LOL! Hopefully the next chapter will put you a bit more at ease so you won't be in shambles. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bren
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 11:13AM
Title: Game Over
I know Elli's shy and all but damn how can she resist Justin. I can see how she'd get really insecure with him not bein affectionate with her but she knows that he's doing it on purpose. Elisha's drving me wild, just butt out girl. Awesome job! Every single chapter you leave it right at the good part. Keep up with the updates, I hope to see one soon. I hope sometime we'll see Elli open up and maybe initiate something, even a date. It would be really cool if she like planned a suprise date for him or somethin! Awesome chap can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Elisha seems to be driving everyone wild, lol! Just remeber that she was just trying to help and stick up for Elli. She just needs some training in how to be subtle and tactful. :) Elli will open up to Justin eventually but it will take time. Thanks for reviewing it's much appreciated!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 06:23AM
Title: Game Over
I want to kick both Justin and Elisha right now. I think it's sweet how Elisha's trying to compensate for her initial jealousy of Elli by looking out for her and befriending her, but she really needs to keep her nose out *nods*. as per usual, you rock, more soon please :o)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Hollie! I'm glad you're liking this story and that you think that I rock. YOU ROCK TOO! LOL! :)
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 01:35AM
Title: Game Over
And Nikki G is right! I just remembered the prologue! Noooo! I don't like sad stories! I might not be able to keep reading now :( I'm sad
Author's Response: Like I said to Nikki G, you never know what might happen.....things could turn out happy......maybe....
Reviewer: Memyself
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/05 - 01:32AM
Title: Game Over
Eh, I understad why he did it, figured it would back fire but I understand where's he's coming from. Might've been a better idea if he talked to Elli about it first though. Elli's gotta come around sooner or later ya know? I mean..just little steps like just holding his hand or giving him a hug. And, to be honest, Ive never practicually liked Elisha, she reminds me of this nosey teacher I used to have. She's always in someone's buiness and she usually ends up making it worse. Blah lol Um..what else? Right, while Elli is upset, I think it's a good time for me to step in ;) Ok, more soon!
Author's Response: You know guys aren't good at talking things out. Look at what happened between Justin and Trace in the chapter before this one. Pssh...men...LOL! You don't like Elisha? I understand that I guess. Maybe you like her better in the coming chapters. :) I hope you stepped in for Elli and "comforted" Justin as best you could. LOL! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/12/05 - 10:51PM
Title: Game Over
Okay I understand why he did what he did even tho it was childish. That argument was hella funny, but the shy seems to be getting out of this shy stage, slowly. That is a good thing, so J better be ready to beg for forgiveness, be open and ask her to be his gf. Oh yeah, I just reread the story and from the opening, this won't be a happy ending. I'm sad about that, very sad. PLease update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Awe, don't be sad. We have a ways to go before the end and you never know what might happen. Maybe I just tossed that sad part into fool you into thinking it wouldn't be a happy ending.....or maybe not (mwahahaha!). I can't believe you took the time to reread the entire story. That's quite flattering that you would even want to do that so thank you. :) And don't worry, Justin knows what he has to do to make things right again. Thanks for reviewing!
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